Ecstasy Paroxysm

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I forgot Far away from the sun's prying rays Shadowed reflection. Weave a starlight web. It shines at the atomic level. With an apocalyptic unit. Label, explore eternal fate. Scattered electrons and protons. Connected with the fairy fire spirit. Our true humanistic art. Have the same flow. Cosmological poetry from infinity It's frustrating. Not all are sitting. Near the hearth. Mumbles and gestures. Observing the light trail Well then. Some are decreasing. Deep thought of syntax! It happened suddenly. You know they are stars Obsolete. Written: June 27, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/3/2022 10:06:00 AM

Insightful and eloquently written, Lasaad. The universe has much to offer and much to teach us. David's comments and your response were whip cream on top on this fine poem. Bill

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/27/2022 12:19:00 PM

Heya Lasaad your tapping into the quanta realm here, where indeed the poem must originate, I have often pondered the source of creativity, it’s goes way beyond intelligence just like the singularity, this is an intriguing poem of metaphors and abstract imagery, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/27/2022 2:53:00 PM

Fascinating Lasaad, I honestly believe they offer hope, not in the destructive sense, but are the gateway to absolute reality, I hope the James Webb telescope will enlighten us more when it comes into operation next month, thank you

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/27/2022 12:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, David. I'm glad you like it and you have reached its deeply hidden essence. I hope many here will get that understanding. In fact, I'm a fan of scientific research and am worried about the last discovery. In our backyard, too close to our planet 26,000 light-years away, a huge black hole emerges out of nowhere, swallowing "Earth-sized" stars and planets "every second" and is continuing to grow. I leave you to ponder all of this.