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Ecstasy and You and Me

in this place now here in the safety of this languid afternoon I close my eyes and listen to her voice her sigh with your hand on my thigh knowing as I do that there is no pretense or disguise no need to hide I am who I am She assures me It's fine Awash in need I let my body plead I care to dare every hindrance to disappear because I deserve to let the woman in me be free to feel Ecstasy makes her appeal: "Make it REAL" roles reversed in revelry the pleaser now yearning to be pleased the giver becomes the receiver and all is as it's meant to be for you and me I let my thoughts fly no earth and no sky nothing matters forgotten the where and why no need to be shy nothing except this build up sensations born of feelings this surging urge for sensual supremacy to be to arrive knowing it will come knowing the world will stop as it has before wanting it again, once more pausing at the pinnacle of passion's pride all things having been played right as it should be release of pain of hurt of everything... everything but Ecstasy who prolongs her stay I don't chase her away I hold on let her play have her way in the wake of her spray I lay Sated sigh on my high I cry eyes closed slowly slowly... She loosens my hold and with kisses on my face she starts to recede back into the realm of fantasy freed echoes of "I love you" coming through the haze starts to lift and I drift...I drift fingers in my hair kisses everywhere Ecstasy exhausted my eyes flutter open to see my life back in focus it resides there in your eyes my destiny Let it be Oh, let it be Always... Ecstasy and you and me Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Inman Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 6:42 PM
Such passion. A beautiful write Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Passion....who can live without it? Thanks, James. Hugs
Bateman Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Best Congratulations Eileen on the POTD honor!! A most powerful and passionate write for sure. All The Best . . . Gary
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:38 AM
Thanks, Gary. I'm truly surprised at how this came about. It's not a poem that has man views. I'm not complaining. :) Hugs
Ashe Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 4:33 PM
"Passion Poetically Personified!" An eyebrow raiser! :-) Congrats on this POTD Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Thanks, Walter. I've raised my share of eyebrows in the past. It's still within limits, I believe. :) Thanks for the visit.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:56 AM
* * * * CONGRATULATIONS * * * *
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Thanks, Sunshine!!! :) Love ya!
Warrior Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Congrats Eileen on POTD!!!...well done...god bless...^WW^
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Really? On THIS piece? I really don't know how TPS does this. This doesn't even have as many views as my two latest ones, but thanks for letting me know. :) I appreciate it.
Mom Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 9:28 AM
damn...
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Ummmmmmm.....
Vaso Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Ok now I am back and can say, wow!!!! Loved this!!!
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:57 AM
:)))) ... A QUICK SHOWER :)))
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thanks, dear. Well, I have to live up to the name....The Queen of Passion. ;) Hugs
Vaso Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:30 PM
I need to go take a shower, brb!
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:27 AM
You are funny, Arthur. Make sure it's a cold shower. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Wowzer, this is beyond ooh la la! I had trouble reading it because my screen got all steamed up.
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Thanks, Richard. :) That's kind of what happened to my screen when I read your Liquid Dreams Rated R. ;) Still one of my favorite of yours. Hugs
Quigley Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Steamy and beautiful!
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM
:) Thanks, Tom. Hadn't written a passionate piece for a time. Glad you liked this.
Smith Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 12:10 PM
WoW...i love it Eileen...i was swimming in your words with a fountain of imagery and alliteration cascading all around me...a fave
Manassian Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 1:01 PM
:) Thanks, Tim. I'm so glad you liked it. I haven't written a passionate piece in a while. Felt good to get it out of my system. Hope all is well. Thanks for faving it. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 11:58 AM
- An intoxication of romance and love ... "Oh, let it be ... Always" .... - Lovely poem my friend Eileen :) - (7) - hugs and happy weekend :) // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Sunshine... :) I haven't written a passionate piece in a while. Felt something was missing. I'm glad you enjoyed it, dear. hugs
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