Ecstasy

E rogenous zones tantalize my lips
C arefully, I tongue tease
S educing your every fantasy
T ill your body is taut 
A sking, begging for sweet release...
S ubmitting to my control,
Y ou cling to me in ecstasy's wake

Jade Celeste
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ainsley Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:20 AM
So much fun to trip the light in waves of wonder with your poem.Thank you Eileen. I may give erotic a try myself.
Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 4:35 PM
woo wee, adult rated and me, all alone at the moment! You have such a way with eroticism! I hope all is golden for you, I am glad you have returned???? Right??? CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 3:45 PM
gosh, has it been a month since I saw one of your last posts? This was an awesome take on ecstasy, sweetie!! Keep up writing acrostics like this one!! As for traffic lights in your country, I hear Mexico is that way too, everyone driving however they want and then bribing cops to not get tickets!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Hi Eileen, thanks for the Visit. I haven't had much time for writing. Hugs Rick.
Wigley Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:18 PM
When I stop trembling, I shall sit in a dark room with a nice cup of tea. Sizzling stuff, Eileen, Viv x
Vaso Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:51 AM
be right back, going for a cold shower! :) So lovely and sensual as usual! hugs!
James Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 3:19 AM
You really bring it!! Well done!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Dropping by with a hug, you are missed.
Curtis Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 7:33 AM
I do not see anyone writing about this subject with the your level of excellence
Manassian Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 10:15 AM
This is a lovely compliment, Jerry. Thank you. It is much appreciated.
Chircop Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 4:28 AM
Our sensual Jade , Lovely poem with a tint of teasing spice,mmmm : ).
Manassian Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Thanks, sweetie. Some of my sensual poems are out there on the net, and I think it best that those go under the name Jade. :) I'm not much into writing lately. Thanks for the visit.
Nance Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Hot hot hot... you bring out the best in ecstasy! :)
Manassian Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked this.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Your "ECSTASY" I think, leaves all of us men, Ecstatic dear, Eileen!
Y. Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Hi Elieen, WoW! This was hot, steamy, senual and well written. You should entered it in the contest it would have placed high-7:-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Passionate perfection Eileen! 7 ; )
Horsman Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Love your ecstasy poem, Eileen..
Devnath  Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 10:51 AM
It's an excellent acrostic on ecstasy. Good luck in the contest with 7 my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 8:43 AM
You should have entered it, I'm sure it would have placed very high. Hugs Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Wow July 1st already. For us this is a little long weekend. I just got home from Vancouver, yippie! I enjoyed reading this one again. I see Jade Celeste has made a reappearance. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:31 PM
I've decided that my sensual writes still be under this name. You wouldn't believe how far my poems have gone on the internet, dear. For sensuality....It's Jade. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 5:50 AM
- Romantic .... steamy written, dear Eileen - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Thanks You, Sunshine. You always warm my heart. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:04 AM
I expect nothing less from you!!!! Lovely and suggestively delightful! Hugs!
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Thank you, dear......You are sweet! I'm heading over your way. Hugs...Did you check your soupmail?
Lawless Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Well.....all I can say is "Thank you!"
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:35 AM
I'm not sure what you mean by this. All I can say is....."You're welcome."
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 5:27 PM
this is a steamy poem you should go ahead and enter it in the contest. Thank you so very much for reading my poems. Hugs Eve
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:44 AM
Thanks, Eve. I appreciate it. I was inspired by the contest theme, but I don't think it's good enough to get me anywhere. Thanks for the lovely visit.
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 5:23 PM
Excellent take on this theme, Eileen!! You're in complete control of a situation that will not elude passionate satisfaction. Hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Yes, Paul....the control has its own euphoria. I do like being in control....but I also will submit when need be. Thanks for the lovely visit, my dear. Always a pleasure....
Deremer Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Very nice.
Manassian Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Thank you, Pam.
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