Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Free verse

Ecstasy

E volved self: where the reality of my existence
C omes into focus; peace and harmony, I experience in the 
S ilence of my mind as tranquility seizes my whole being.
T hen emerges a glow in my vision, under shut eyes and
A drenalin shoots in my system as I dare move in that radiance 
S urrendering myself, is the beginning of a sublime process of elevation as
Y onder, I’m carried in a vortex of light, volatile, and my body ceases to exist.


28/06/16
Placed 3 for Ecstasy Contest by John Hamilton

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Sunita U.D Palawon July 7, 2016 at 9:41 AM Thanks a lot Andrea. You did very well in some contests, I viewed. Keep it up! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2016 at 5:23 PM YES, a third place!! Big congrats, sweetie.

Alexis Y. July 4, 2016 at 12:25 PM Hi Sunita, Congrats on your 3rd place win it was well deserved: -) Alexis Sunita U.D Palawon July 5, 2016 at 11:18 AM Thanks I'm glad you like it. :)

Karam Misra July 3, 2016 at 10:58 AM This is great, Sunita! Congratulations on your fabulous win. ~karam~

John Lawless July 3, 2016 at 8:12 AM Congrats on your placement Sunita. The depths and heights of meditation realized. Sunita U.D Palawon July 4, 2016 at 8:02 AM Thanks,,,true..it's very nice! :)

Paul Callus July 3, 2016 at 6:47 AM A beautiful peaceful journey leading to sublime heights of ecstasy! I envy your experience, Sunita! ~ Congratulations on obtaining this merited podium finish. Regards // paul Sunita U.D Palawon July 3, 2016 at 7:14 AM Thanks Paul..ya its a beautiful experience meditating and I enjoy it. :)

Sunita U.D Palawon July 3, 2016 at 12:40 AM Thanks to all the juries of the contests and sponsor for my placement and congrats to all the winners and for your fabulous poems! :D

Daver Austin July 1, 2016 at 12:29 PM You've taken a great trip to the inner and told us about it beautifully. Love, daver Sunita U.D Palawon July 1, 2016 at 11:10 PM Thanks, pleased to hear these words from you. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2016 at 5:27 AM - Lovely written, Sunita - I enjoy it in peace and harmony :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunita U.D Palawon July 1, 2016 at 11:11 AM Thanks Sunshine, I'm glad you like this. I enjoy your poems. :)

Sandra Haight June 30, 2016 at 3:11 PM Yours is a beautifully-written Acrostic, Sunita. Your imagery is mystical and spiritual as you describe this sublime process of 'ecstasy'. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Sunita U.D Palawon July 1, 2016 at 11:14 AM Thanks Sandra, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've been learning a lot from you great poets! :D

Probir Gupta June 30, 2016 at 12:17 AM Enviable process toward and into ecstasy ... Sunita U.D Palawon June 30, 2016 at 12:50 PM Glad you like it..thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2016 at 11:23 PM Ooooh, I would love that to happen to me!!! Sunita U.D Palawon June 30, 2016 at 12:50 PM I do hope you attain it...true bliss. Thanks