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Eco-friendly? The Prius was so quiet That none of the kids spied it As it sped around the corner And struck Lil’ Jack Horner The driver didn’t stop As the kids stood there in shock Lil’ Jack landed with a CRACK! And lay unmoving, on his back Susan Burch The prius actually is very quiet, so I created an extreme situation to make people think about that, the consequences of eliminating volume in a normal everyday vehicle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2014 4:45:00 AM
Scarey Susan I can picture it good write congrats on featuring Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/19/2011 11:37:00 PM
Susan, a late~ congratulations on your wonderful win. In my "you pick a poem contest" ;-) Thank you for the support,.hope you are enjoying your holidays~.p.d.
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "It's Up To You" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 3:26:00 AM
Very nice!Congratulations Susan on your win.
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:06:00 AM
wow, Susan, I have finally come across a poem of yours I had never seen before. If it did not win in that one car contest, well, I am glad to see it finally won in THIS contest because it is quirky and fun and I just really like it! congratulations.
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Date: 12/17/2011 2:23:00 PM
My neighbor has one and when out walking my dogs, I never hear him approaching from behind. Not a good thing. Good write Susan. Congratulations
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:39:00 PM
I'm glad it was Jack Horner and not Horne LOL. It's good to see you writing poems again : )
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Date: 6/10/2011 11:34:00 AM
a cute little rhyme, a great one you wrote here. thank you for commenting on Howling winds.
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:09:00 AM
An interesting spin on this theme. Eco-friendly is not so friendly when lives are at risk. A good write, Susan. If this is for the contest, and I guess it is, good luck! Love and best wishes, Robert.
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:14:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Susan. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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