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ECLIPSE

~ECLIPSE~

The shining light hides behind my eyes,
Comes in a super nova surprise
My spirit glides into the skies,
Spreading the perfect heat like the sunrise

I was like a diamond under the beauty of the ocean!
My current rides out with smooth motions,
Leaving a taste with intense emotion
Captured by my tides, sunk to my love potion

The sun sends my waves like a mirage of snow
I got the moon to favor upon my glow
With every star touching my inner soul
A glimpse of darkness in my light entwining with a massive flow

Blinded by my own ECLIPSE!
My sun & moon collide
Until the day we both touch lips

by;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:22:00 PM
so cute **SKAT**
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:26:00 AM
This is the first poem I've read by you... And already I'm hoping for more; this is wonderful!!!
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Date: 11/3/2014 5:21:00 AM
I had to read this, the title got my attention, you have such an amazing playful and extremely mature touch to your writing, you can relate to all ages, it is always a joy to read something you write,
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Date: 9/9/2014 5:44:00 AM
I really enjoy your romantic writes. This will adorn my list.
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Date: 3/11/2014 7:01:00 PM
I was quite sure I commented on this before but damn if I could find it, thus I shall do so now...Well NOW I've gone and done did it! Lost my train of thought....My habit has been to pick out a fav line, so being the dirty old man that I am rather proud to be, Gotta go for the last...
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Date: 3/11/2014 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend PD. Wishing you a great day!! :) hugsss
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:59:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, PD
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Date: 3/10/2014 1:57:00 AM
Face it! SIS, lol, you rock! SID
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:27:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem Linda, Congrats on your win......Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:15:00 PM
I see you come to win.. You do not come in vein.. Congrats PD!
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:48:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2013 4:29:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, PD! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/17/2013 11:02:00 AM
I love the line "blinded by my own eclipse"........that is classic poetry!! Well done, PD !!
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM
So glad to read again this stellar poem of yours which I love and adore so much my dearest sis! I'm also soooo happy that it won again. My biggest heartfelt congratulations again my dearest sis with my loveliest hugs to you! love m4ever, Leonora
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:07:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Linda
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:24:00 PM
Love your style!!!Great imagery!!!WOW~Congrats to you!!!!!!!God bless!!
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Date: 12/24/2012 2:53:00 PM
An eclipse... with your lips... what more could one desire... Terry (Merry X-Mas under an almost full moon)
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Date: 11/28/2012 4:48:00 AM
What a beautiful poem you have written here. I especially love your last stanza.
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2012 4:29:00 PM
Beautiful and Awesome piece,PD.I love the imagery and your self description..."My sun&moon will always collide until the day we both touch lips"..Hmm..Congrats on your win..XOXO..
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Date: 4/26/2012 3:28:00 PM
It wonderful to feel so positive about oneself!!! HUGS PD Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2012 8:21:00 AM
Such sensual rhyme, gurlie...I felt all tingly inside! Hey,,I couldn't figure out what a contemporary poem was...I still don't get it...You wow'd me with intense imagery...Great work, PD! FF, Gwendolen
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:15:00 AM
Oh' how I long to fill the warm glow of those felling's in my mind's eye. You have a beautiful rhyme there. One that you should be proud of. Another favorite of mind. Kiss up, Kiss up/Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS Oh' how long has it been since I heard from you! Check me out!
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Date: 5/16/2011 2:56:00 AM
* “'Captured By My Tides * Sunk to My Love Potion' * Awesome Poem * Dear Astonishing & Beautiful LeeAnn * Powerful * Passions Flames Rising * Brilliant Imagery Amid Fascination * Rhyme Time Extreme * Simply & Completely Beautiful * A Fave By A Fave That's Got to Be A Poetic Queen * And I Loved The Final Stanza ,,, Smile * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
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Date: 2/27/2011 5:11:00 PM
oohh....this gets the senses flowing! Great feelings of love and romance live within you, keep on letting it flow you will go far with poems like these thanks for the read once again love ur writings my dear friend ~Virginia
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