Poet Destroyer A Poet Rhyme

Eclipse

~ECLIPSE~

The shining light hides behind my eyes,
Comes in a super nova surprise
My spirit glides into the skies,
Spreading the perfect heat like the sunrise

I was like a diamond under the beauty of the ocean!
My current rides out with smooth motions,
Leaving a taste with intense emotion
Captured by my tides, sunk to my love potion

The sun sends my waves like a mirage of snow
I got the moon to favor upon my glow
With every star touching my inner soul
A glimpse of darkness in my light entwining with a massive flow

Blinded by my own ECLIPSE!
My sun & moon collide
Until the day we both touch lips

by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:22 PM so cute **SKAT**

Yolanda Nyembezi November 28, 2014 at 8:26 AM This is the first poem I've read by you... And already I'm hoping for more; this is wonderful!!!

Cynthia Ferguson November 3, 2014 at 5:21 AM I had to read this, the title got my attention, you have such an amazing playful and extremely mature touch to your writing, you can relate to all ages, it is always a joy to read something you write,

Maurice Yvonne September 9, 2014 at 5:44 AM I really enjoy your romantic writes. This will adorn my list.

Tim Ryerson March 11, 2014 at 7:01 PM I was quite sure I commented on this before but damn if I could find it, thus I shall do so now...Well NOW I've gone and done did it! Lost my train of thought....My habit has been to pick out a fav line, so being the dirty old man that I am rather proud to be, Gotta go for the last...

Bukang Liwayway March 11, 2014 at 12:05 AM Congratulations on your win friend PD. Wishing you a great day!! :) hugsss

Dr.Ram Mehta March 10, 2014 at 5:59 AM Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, PD

Skat A March 10, 2014 at 1:57 AM Face it! SIS, lol, you rock! SID

Roger Horsch March 9, 2014 at 7:27 PM Such a wonderful poem Linda, Congrats on your win......Hugs.....Roger

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2014 at 4:48 PM - A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman June 19, 2013 at 4:29 PM Beautiful imagery, PD! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards June 17, 2013 at 11:02 AM I love the line "blinded by my own eclipse"........that is classic poetry!! Well done, PD !!

Len Gasun June 17, 2013 at 10:06 AM So glad to read again this stellar poem of yours which I love and adore so much my dearest sis! I'm also soooo happy that it won again. My biggest heartfelt congratulations again my dearest sis with my loveliest hugs to you! love m4ever, Leonora

Joseph May June 16, 2013 at 3:07 PM congrats on a fine win Linda

Terry O'Leary December 24, 2012 at 2:53 PM An eclipse... with your lips... what more could one desire... Terry (Merry X-Mas under an almost full moon)

Jon A Cavanaugh November 28, 2012 at 4:48 AM What a beautiful poem you have written here. I especially love your last stanza.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 1, 2012 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest P.D. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo April 26, 2012 at 4:29 PM Beautiful and Awesome piece,PD.I love the imagery and your self description..."My sun&moon will always collide until the day we both touch lips"..Hmm..Congrats on your win..XOXO..

Debbie Guzzi April 26, 2012 at 3:28 PM It wonderful to feel so positive about oneself!!! HUGS PD Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Gwendolen Song April 25, 2012 at 8:21 AM Such sensual rhyme, gurlie...I felt all tingly inside! Hey,,I couldn't figure out what a contemporary poem was...I still don't get it...You wow'd me with intense imagery...Great work, PD! FF, Gwendolen

Gary Fields August 16, 2011 at 11:15 AM Oh' how I long to fill the warm glow of those felling's in my mind's eye. You have a beautiful rhyme there. One that you should be proud of. Another favorite of mind. Kiss up, Kiss up/Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS Oh' how long has it been since I heard from you! Check me out!

Sarah Seraphin May 16, 2011 at 2:56 AM * “'Captured By My Tides * Sunk to My Love Potion' * Awesome Poem * Dear Astonishing & Beautiful LeeAnn * Powerful * Passions Flames Rising * Brilliant Imagery Amid Fascination * Rhyme Time Extreme * Simply & Completely Beautiful * A Fave By A Fave That's Got to Be A Poetic Queen * And I Loved The Final Stanza ,,, Smile * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

Virginia Frayer February 27, 2011 at 5:11 PM oohh....this gets the senses flowing! Great feelings of love and romance live within you, keep on letting it flow you will go far with poems like these thanks for the read once again love ur writings my dear friend ~Virginia

Mary Meade Stephenson December 18, 2010 at 4:51 PM This is so filled with passion and romance P.D. Love the rhythm of it. Just absolutely beautiful!! Thanks so much for sharing and for always taking the time to read my writes. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

Don Johnson November 13, 2010 at 3:08 AM great poem mate... thanks 4 comments.... you the man!

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