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Eclipse

~ECLIPSE~ The shining light hides behind my eyes, Comes in a super nova surprise My spirit glides into the skies, Spreading the perfect heat like the sunrise I was like a diamond under the beauty of the ocean! My current rides out with smooth motions, Leaving a taste with intense emotion Captured by my tides, sunk to my love potion The sun sends my waves like a mirage of snow I got the moon to favor upon my glow With every star touching my inner soul A glimpse of darkness in my light entwining with a massive flow Blinded by my own ECLIPSE! My sun & moon collide Until the day we both touch lips by;p.d.

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:22:00 PM

so cute **SKAT**

Yolanda Nyembezi

Date: 11/28/2014 8:26:00 AM

This is the first poem I've read by you... And already I'm hoping for more; this is wonderful!!!

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 11/3/2014 5:21:00 AM

I had to read this, the title got my attention, you have such an amazing playful and extremely mature touch to your writing, you can relate to all ages, it is always a joy to read something you write,

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 5:44:00 AM

I really enjoy your romantic writes. This will adorn my list.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/11/2014 7:01:00 PM

I was quite sure I commented on this before but damn if I could find it, thus I shall do so now...Well NOW I've gone and done did it! Lost my train of thought....My habit has been to pick out a fav line, so being the dirty old man that I am rather proud to be, Gotta go for the last...

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/11/2014 12:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win friend PD. Wishing you a great day!! :) hugsss

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/10/2014 5:59:00 AM

Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, PD

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2014 1:57:00 AM

Face it! SIS, lol, you rock! SID

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/9/2014 7:27:00 PM

Such a wonderful poem Linda, Congrats on your win......Hugs.....Roger

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2014 4:48:00 PM

- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/19/2013 4:29:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, PD! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/17/2013 11:02:00 AM

I love the line "blinded by my own eclipse"........that is classic poetry!! Well done, PD !!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/17/2013 10:06:00 AM

So glad to read again this stellar poem of yours which I love and adore so much my dearest sis! I'm also soooo happy that it won again. My biggest heartfelt congratulations again my dearest sis with my loveliest hugs to you! love m4ever, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 6/16/2013 3:07:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Linda

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/24/2012 2:53:00 PM

An eclipse... with your lips... what more could one desire... Terry (Merry X-Mas under an almost full moon)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/28/2012 4:48:00 AM

What a beautiful poem you have written here. I especially love your last stanza.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest P.D. Love, Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/26/2012 4:29:00 PM

Beautiful and Awesome piece,PD.I love the imagery and your self description..."My sun&moon will always collide until the day we both touch lips"..Hmm..Congrats on your win..XOXO..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/26/2012 3:28:00 PM

It wonderful to feel so positive about oneself!!! HUGS PD Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/25/2012 8:21:00 AM

Such sensual rhyme, gurlie...I felt all tingly inside! Hey,,I couldn't figure out what a contemporary poem was...I still don't get it...You wow'd me with intense imagery...Great work, PD! FF, Gwendolen

Gary Fields

Date: 8/16/2011 11:15:00 AM

Oh' how I long to fill the warm glow of those felling's in my mind's eye. You have a beautiful rhyme there. One that you should be proud of. Another favorite of mind. Kiss up, Kiss up/Your friend in the pen/G,FIELDS Oh' how long has it been since I heard from you! Check me out!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/16/2011 2:56:00 AM

* “'Captured By My Tides * Sunk to My Love Potion' * Awesome Poem * Dear Astonishing & Beautiful LeeAnn * Powerful * Passions Flames Rising * Brilliant Imagery Amid Fascination * Rhyme Time Extreme * Simply & Completely Beautiful * A Fave By A Fave That's Got to Be A Poetic Queen * And I Loved The Final Stanza ,,, Smile * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

Virginia Frayer

Date: 2/27/2011 5:11:00 PM

oohh....this gets the senses flowing! Great feelings of love and romance live within you, keep on letting it flow you will go far with poems like these thanks for the read once again love ur writings my dear friend ~Virginia

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/18/2010 4:51:00 PM

This is so filled with passion and romance P.D. Love the rhythm of it. Just absolutely beautiful!! Thanks so much for sharing and for always taking the time to read my writes. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

Don Johnson

Date: 11/13/2010 3:08:00 AM

great poem mate... thanks 4 comments.... you the man!