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Eclipse

Mourn one! Mourn all… * * * * * * * * * * *

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/28/2023 5:41:00 PM

Brilliant, albeit sadly so...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2023 7:16:00 PM

A sad fact of life…if you’re not gone, many precede you. God bless!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/27/2023 12:25:00 PM

Magnificent poem, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2023 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/25/2023 12:57:00 PM

- Simple and great, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2023 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/25/2023 11:13:00 AM

A creative/fun ~ write/picture. Have a great day/week............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/25/2023 8:38:00 AM

So much said in such few words my friend. Yes, we do so miss those gone! A Fav..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2023 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2023 5:10:00 PM

Kim, your imagination is truly remarkable. I found myself greatly inspired by your work and thoroughly enjoyed it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2023 9:44:00 PM

I really appreciate you, my friend! Thank you!

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/24/2023 4:46:00 PM

very nice inspiration, enjoyed but sorry for your losses yann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2023 9:45:00 PM

Thank you for that.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/24/2023 2:27:00 PM

This one is a "poser", Kim. But does one "eclipse" the other?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2023 4:35:00 PM

I’d say mourning “all” eclipses the one only. I’m getting older and many people I know are passing over to the other side. I am more aware what my grandparents and parents have gone through whilst most kids are innocent of it. Thanks, Jim :)

Paige Hind

Date: 6/24/2023 12:01:00 PM

Hmmm... very imaginative!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2023 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/24/2023 9:24:00 AM

Sweet Kim, my grief will not eclipse.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2023 12:32:00 PM

The first one is hard, then comes many more. Hugs ~ Kim