Echoes Remain the Same
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Cold walk the earth
Love faded white
Gave up the war
I realize
All will become
All will arise
Stay with me
I hear them call the tide
Take me in
I see the last divide
Hopelessly
I leave this soul behind
And I am paralyzed - Lyrics from 'Far Away' Breaking Benjamin

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I tried to speak, but the words were hollow,
My breath held tight to leeward of an echo.
You said goodbye, like the end would follow,
But I’m stuck dumb trying to swallow.
You're far away,
But an echo still remains.
I called your name,
But silence forgot my claims.
You're far, far away,
But I still feel the flickering flame.
Of all we lost too soon,
As tide ebbed from our empty room.
I watched your eyes fade to dark gray,
Like stars that fail, shift to deep dark red.
Take me in to join you there,
I can't move to follow you, I'm paralyzed.
Copyright © John Anderson | Year Posted 2025
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