Echoes in the Locker Room

They never saw me—not really.
Only the outline I traced in the halls,
A whisper of denim and shy glances,
A ghost who smiled too politely.

They passed notes like grenades,
Laughed too loudly
When the silence was breaking me.
I wore their words like a second skin—
Tight, blistering,
But invisible to them.

You asked if I was okay once—
But your eyes flicked away
Before the truth had a chance to crawl out.
Still,
That was kind,
Compared to the others
Who carved their stories into my name
Without ever asking for mine.

I screamed,
But only inside,
Where echoes get lost
In the ribcage's corners.

And when I disappeared,
They asked,
“Why didn’t she say something?”
As if silence isn’t something we’re taught
By the ones who pretend
They’re listening.
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moore Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 4:46 PM
OMG I SAW THIS ON THE FEATURED PAGE GOOD JOB IM SO PROUD OF YOU!!!
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February 21, 2026 at 3:39 PM
HII IM MADI BUT I HAD TO MAKE A NEW ACCOUNT
niem Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 3:49 AM
OMG YAYYY ????
Warren Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 3:07 PM
So well captured, the angst, sadness. Well done.
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May 8, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Thank u. I try my best to express the emotion as my priority
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April 21, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
niem Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Thanks!
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April 17, 2025 at 1:28 PM
10 OUT OF 10!! i encourage you to keep going with poetry and dont ever quit, you are a wonderful poet!!
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