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Echoes In My Head- Talking In Your Sleep Contest

I awoke  hot sweating heaving..so it seems
mumbling so many words that had no meaning,
where had I been, where was my river of dreams,
whose hands had been sending my nerve end screaming.

why can’t I recall the face that launched my depth
what language was I speaking so fluently,
where was the place that had held my bated breadth,
shaking with passion, no longer suently

I bury my head in my pillow of shame
remembering the passion that overflows
riding the erotic waves I shout a name
in my head still have the sensual echoes

Penned 16  January 2017

Contest : Talking in your sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/21/2017 10:54:00 PM
Congrats Seren - I think we've all had dreams like this at one time or another. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 1/20/2017 9:12:00 AM
Great take on the theme Seren...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2017 3:29:00 PM
Hello Joseph, thank you so much...Seren
Date: 1/20/2017 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations Seren :)
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Date: 1/20/2017 3:30:00 PM
thank you Gary....Seren
Date: 1/19/2017 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on the Win Seren - great poem :)
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:47:00 AM
thanks Claudia....Seren
Date: 1/19/2017 9:37:00 PM
Congrats, Seren!
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:49:00 AM
thank you Kim ....Seren
Date: 1/19/2017 8:54:00 PM
An excellent take on the contest Seren, congratulations for your winning write.
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:48:00 AM
thank you Lewis ....Seren
Date: 1/17/2017 8:34:00 PM
Very good entry for the contest, Seren, good luck :) Hugs
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Date: 1/16/2017 5:26:00 PM
You might have to video tape it ...lol...I wish I could remember my sweet ones.
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