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On the edge of the evacuation zone Miyuki holds her daughter tip-toeing in pink sneakers her small hands fragile blossoms opening to the man with the beeping wand They were outside in the karesansui washing and raking rocks, when the school heaved, convulsed then pressed into silence one-hundred-and-seven voices rising inside So now they wait with strangers in ordered lines of sorrow for bread and drinking water as an adolescent, eyes downcast sees the small pink laces and offers up his only ration of precious onigiri Hooded and white masked they walk three days and bed-less nights toward Ishinomaki by the ocean to family, friends, and home forever transformed The landscape jumbles unfamiliar with plastic wreckage and automobiles detritus flooded in a field where Japonica once grew while moon-suited men and women gather albums for the living And after sunset Miyuki moves her little girl away from a white-taped blue-bagged lifeless form toward the humming black-robed Monk, his prayers for light and workers burned exposed to radiation ten thousand times too high And in the shadows one old man kneels beside a fetid pool and scoops rice to carry back to neighbours moved to higher ground, un-opens one last bottled spirit bows his head and offers Miyuki and her first and only everything he has At last they reach the shelter’s glow beneath the starless robe of night not used to wearing shoes indoors Miyuki helps her daughter fold sheets of painful news into an origami box to hold her last and only pair And in the morning as they face the stretch of road for home to unknown love and losses there they turn and gaze toward the east awaiting still spring’s warming breeze to rise with brilliant red once more new light of wondrous dawn ~~~~~~~~~ 'karesansui' is a Japanese rock garden or 'dry landscape'. Rocks are often washed. 'onigiri' is the emergency rice being distributed to survivors in Japan. 'Japonica' is a type of (short-grained) Japanese rice. for Debbie Guzzie's contest, 'Tribute to Japan' by ~Soulfire~

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Date: 6/11/2012 5:48:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 5/28/2011 6:27:00 AM
It is absolutely no wonder yu won top honors with this passionate, empathetic piece of life's literature showing the great honor and humility of a stricken people. My congratulations to you Soulfire .
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:20:00 AM
Many Congrats Soulfire on notvhing top honours in Debbie's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:03:00 PM
soulfire, how did you know all these details?? It's like you knew exactly what happened to this little girl and her family. Have you lived in Japan? Is this a story of a real girl you heard of?Wow, this is a most deserved first place win. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:53:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved first position!
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:18:00 AM
congratulations on your 1st place win. A beautiful moving piece of poetry. x
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Soulfire. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congrats to you in this winning piece.
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:10:00 AM
Beautifully written, Soulfire. Congratulations on your first-place win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:01:00 AM
Reading this very touching tribute brought me there, Soulfire-- beautifully written and just deeply moving- and you ended it with so much hope :) Super congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! ^_^
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Date: 5/19/2011 7:29:00 AM
It is a gift to read this incredible poem, no doubt in my mind that you are the winner, and meant to share your stories. Such a educated, and heartfelt piece, this is extraordinary. Just wonderful! Congratulations...so glad I had the chance to read this one!
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Date: 5/19/2011 7:24:00 AM
Dear Jen, A testimony to the self-evident truth that you were born to be a writer. This is a breath-takingly beautiful narratie, that totally captures the incredible compassion, soft beauty and strength of the Japaneese people. There is much the world can learn from their example. Many, many congratulations on your FIRSP PLACE WIN!!! Much love, Elaine
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of debbie.Soulfire
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congrats Soulfire on your first place win in Japan contest.. great write and win ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/14/2011 9:01:00 AM
An incredible tribute to the people of Japan. This is absolutely awesome and I hope more soupers read this. A heart gripping story you have penned. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:55:00 PM
I see you worked very hard on this one. It's sure to steal Deb's heart! Awesome writing, Soufire.
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:15:00 PM
Sure to top the winner's circle, Jen. Absolutely heart-wrenching, moving and beautiful all at the same time. An incredible tribute to h an incredible people, by an incredible writer and poet. Love, Elaine
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:47:00 PM
beautiful awe-inspiring write paying tribute to Japan. This is the best tribute I have read, Good luck, Soulfire.
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