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so ... demanding she told me to stop to stop 'thinking like a poet' ... but what the hell did that mean?!? she added unto, thusly - 'stop creating Tolkein worlds' (verbatim) that hit home ... any other fool with a pen would take it as compliment but I knew her too well ... I knew exactly what she meant and kindness was not the dish being served 'you are not so tragic as you think', she informed me 'not so heartsick as your dragon kingdoms' ... 'or their celibate heroes' ... (my vision and ire, flooding red) but I am a poet, you see not by choice or motive or even pitiful circumstance and 'twas so easy for her to say as my heart thrummed for naught but her and her heart thrummed ... for him.

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Date: 11/2/2020 2:15:00 AM
AH, the sorrows, and the lack of understanding that a poet too oft faces. Yes, sacrifices must be made. It is in the ink bled upon the page, my friend. A fav. God bless.
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Date: 10/29/2020 6:01:00 PM
LOVE this, greg. A fave.
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:48:00 AM
Another amazing poem G, I guess to not think like a poet means to not feel anything, hard to do as poets we do FEEL everything!
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:06:00 AM
Wow! Lots of emotion and the lot of a poet!
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