Easter Church Ladies

So polite. Wearing gloves. And hats. Hair in Easter colors.
Church ladies; prissy, smiling, crackling in their perfumes.
Flowered dresses, sitting primly on the hard wooden pews,
Singing in loud overtones songs they have known for decades.

Smiling at the Easter bonnets, and the tiny white lace gloves
Worn only by them and the toddlers now, everyone else in
Blue jeans, plaids, regular street clothes,
Sunday best no longer applies

Still they come, in their lavender hair, wearing their Bibles
In sheaves and satchels, letting their slips hang a bit in back.
Not as lively as before, but still with sparks they throw the
Way of Old Bill, the only bachelor over eighty, the reason some still come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rigoler Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:00 PM
First, Care, you are correct: My poem about the hour-glass came to me first with the last line. Are you psychic? It took at least six attempts to get it right, however. Persistenace pays off. As for Easter I don't celebrate it: one percent "Christian", 99 percent pagan. / M
Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:02 PM
I am psychic, thank you for asking. I knew it the instant I read it. Ha!
Bangalee Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 5:51 AM
So politely they come,... the reason some still come./// wonderful expressive
Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:02 PM
Thank you. I am taking a bit of a bow.
Onclaud Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 7:02 PM
very interesting, caren.. sometimes, people attend church services for reasons other than praise and worship... ohh, those women!..* grin*...huggs
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:31 PM
I know and Old Bill, what a devil, huh?
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 6:22 PM
oh you described them so WELL, Caren. Loved the part about their slips showing. haha
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:32 PM
And am I wrong then? I know you and I both know them.
Horsman Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Times have changed Caren, yet the love of God grows and grows..love the poem, scenes i remember well...
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:33 PM
They have in a way, Harry, but church seems pretty much the same for the little girls and the older girls. Both kinds like to dress up.
Mcferran Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 5:04 PM
Love your descriptions of these pastel-clad ladies (in all their lavender-haired glory)!! I remember women like this at my old congregation. Priceless write, my friend (and a FAV for me)! ;D
Mcferran Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Hahaha! Lavender hair or not- somehow, I can't see you sitting up all prim & prissy like the ladies you described!... ;D
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Hahahahaha I am laughing my lavender hair off right now! Which is too bad as it matched my lavender tattoo.
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Caren, it's a wonder to me to see women of any age dress like a lady anymore. I don't think they come to their Chuches to flirt with some old dude.what for? I don't think God counts in most lives at any age. UNLESS in case of illness. Haven't seen white gloves or hats for eons. Just bad hair, leggings and hoodies. Attractive? Hardly, Sunshine is right about Europe. Panagiota Romios
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Hey, Patti, I like your idea. About them NOT coming to church to flirt. It makes way for a terrific other poem. Do you mind if I steal it? You know me....
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Great ending. This reminds me of Easter in the 50s. Grat work
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Thank you Allen. Now I will have to go back up there and read my ending.
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 7:58 AM
- In Norway the churches are almost empty all year ... but, "everyone" goes to church on Christmas Eve .... ridiculous - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Aha! I know this is pretty common in the US too; there is a joke that many families do not miss Christmas Eve or Easter, but all the other days.
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