Easter Bunny Race

Easter bunny race
Fell as he could not keep pace
Muddy bunny face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 12, 2015 at 12:17 PM
CAROL,LOL.... A FUN DAY.... SKAT
Aubrey Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 11:15 AM
This is so cute! And thank you very much for your kind words, Carol!
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:48 AM
missed this, Carol, love it. harry
Johnson Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 5:43 PM
good one S C B, lovely is, it surely be....
Madonsela Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:48 PM
cute indeed, i keep feeling this fuzzy feeling , i love this. *SMILES* Ronny
Eastman Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Very cute image. Loved it.
Macmillan Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:23 PM
Genuine giggle! Too cute :-) Glad I finally dropped by for a read. Hugs, Cyndi
Akinwande Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 12:50 AM
loving Easter rhyme... I love it Carol.
Goller Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 12:00 PM
A fun Easter Haiku,thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Song Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 1:17 AM
An entire story in 3 lines, Carol...fun one here. Hey, have the happiest of Easters to you! Love, Gwendolen
Maverick Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 12:39 PM
No fun for the bunny Carol,, nor for who may have gambled and lost his munny; i know i know i should have wrote money..) "BUT I JUST COULDN'T HELP IT...!
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 2:12 PM
You tickled me pink thank you Joe. Love, Carol
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April 5, 2012 at 1:35 AM
Thanks, Carol, for your kind comment re my poem. Hope you have an awesome Easter. Cute Easter poem. God bless & love, Maureen
A   Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Carol, ha ha ha... hope this is that family race... and not the bunny running for his life... sorry..i picked up more than 2 images for your haiku..i even pictured the bunny, trying to get all them eggs,, and tripping over the turtle,,, and muddy muddy ...face..luv~ always* your little PD **
Babcock Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Wishing you and your family a very Happy Easter. I know our house will be full on the weekend. Cute haiku. love phyl
Pettit Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 12:13 PM
The tortoise passed him and won the race. Good little haiku for Easter.
Ball Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Too cute Carol. Brings back memories of my girls and the race for the Easter eggs on the hunt. Tripping, falling and giggling as they gathered their prizes in their baskets. Good job and God Bless and Happy Easter, JB
Horne Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 9:32 AM
lol, love this witty one, carol
Debole Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Hi Carol - Like your idea of an Easter bunny race. Good one! - Gail
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March 31, 2012 at 12:31 AM
I knew from the title I'd enjoy this. And you did not let me down. - Chuck
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 8:03 PM
I like that last line a lot. Poor muddy bunny face!
Devonshire Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 3:31 PM
LOL That's so adorable, Carol. Love your "muddy bunny" haiku! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Cute...Got a chuckle..I could just see that clumsy bunny...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Susan Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 2:14 PM
ha! poor thing! this is adorable! I even LOVE the way it rhymes. good one Carol :)
Sweetheart Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 1:51 PM
oh poor bunny.. hope he hopped along after his fall.. sweet rhyme in Haiku Carol luv.. hope your day if wonderful .. ,my doc said ..good progress today.. yeah..
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