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Earthly Angel

~   each moment that I spend wrapped in your wings,

          means one less wasted 'midst those lesser things   ~








* This is a new form I've created called "Rithimus Duo Tantum", which means simply, "rhyme two only", and is made up of two lines of Rhyme taken from a previously written piece in their original order. (This was taken from a poem called "Afflatus"). Not really a form as such in itself, as there are MANY two-lined rhymes already, but I intend to use it for upcoming contests I will run, and needed to give it a designation. *
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Marc Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 3:51 AM
I love this ~ it has stirred up a wonderful memory :)
Radice Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:19 AM
You bring so many feelings to life with so few words.
La France Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Greg ,congratulations on your win in Brian's 2 line contest, with this beauty _Constance
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:41 AM
This is too beautiful a write. A fav for me.
Fowler Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Beautiful Greg, and I like the new form. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Watt Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 11:18 PM
I remember the Afflatus poem, Greg. Congrats for another winning gem. ~ John
Seeker Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:34 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 5:44 PM
wow, Greg. it's hard enough finding FOUR great lines that stand on their own, but to have found two like this, Bravo! Congrats on a very well deserved win.
Chamberlain Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Fantastic, beautifully written. Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
Hamilton Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:20 PM
Yeah I'm lovin it...hey G you judged your contest yet!
Barden Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:42 PM
Thank you, John. No, I have not ... I would have posted the results.
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