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Observe the wonders as they occur around you. Don’t claim them. Feel the artistry moving through and be silent - Rumi I sit or stand, without a sound, And look for marvels all around, The miracles of Earth: The flowers growing in the ground; The sparrows soaring heaven bound; A hatching or a birth. Jack Horne for Nette’s Rumi in rime couee contest

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Date: 5/22/2012 7:31:00 AM
I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 1:08:00 PM
Short, sweet and true! Congrad's on Your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:10:00 PM
Very nice Jack!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:58:00 PM
Weel done, jack.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:49:00 PM
Congrats..Good job...Sara
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations Jack on your win!!! Well Done! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:19:00 AM
Around us, are the miracles....I agree that we must notice and be amazed by each one! Lovely poem, Jack!!
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:26:00 AM
A very beautiful imagery, Jack. Congrats to you :)
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:26:00 AM
Jack congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on another winning piece Jack xx
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:09:00 AM
lyrical and crisp in expression, jack.. . big cheers to you for winning in my contest!..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/29/2012 12:06:00 PM
I love to write in verse also, Jack, your poem is peaceful and lovely, so visual, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for the visit
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Date: 4/28/2012 3:15:00 PM
To feel true joy, one learns to appreciate all of our planet's blessings, Jack. This is a lovely poem (not familiar with the form) and I'm sending winning wishes your way! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2012 12:53:00 PM
Jack nicely constructed...David
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Date: 4/28/2012 12:14:00 AM
I really like how you did your Rumi rime. I really need to get work on this one too!!
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Date: 4/27/2012 9:47:00 PM
These are brilliantly composed words and are too beautiful and too good. Great write my friend on Earth for which we owe so much, but we do so little. "I sit or stand, without a sound, And look for marvels all around," I enjoy the company of sparrows, who sit and fly around my room all day long & often I catch them in my Camera, when they sing their joyous song. Thank you for your sweet words on Sparrow. My good wishes for your entry in Nette's contest. Love & best wishes...Ravindra..Jack H.
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:32:00 PM
Marvelous Rumi interpretation Jack!!love it...best wishes in the contest...Well Done...big hugs,love~deb
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:59:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner for the contest..I have not check her contest out..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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