Early Spring

early spring clink of marbles against school walls AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on June 26, 2018

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/26/2018 3:23:00 PM

Huzzah! I remember the deafening roll of thunder from the spilled marbles echoing off the classroom walls and the teacher's "had enough of marbles" look ;) Lovely haiku to bring it back xomo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/27/2018 7:05:00 AM

No no. Played outside at recess. After that last marble drop marbles were no longer allowed in class. Period. Now I look back with deep empathy for that teacher. ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thanks, Maureen. We did it outside... you did in indoors?