Early Riser

I rose early today

before the dream’s end

tried to hold on to its tail
before shaken loose,
watching the Nightly
race off, to dive into
the fading dark at the
horizon. 

Dreams are like that:
like fairy dust
and alien visions

avoiding analysis

like, where was I

before the first slap
before the first cry
before being bathed
dry, then placed in the
trembling arms of my
mother, beholding her
labored miracle

parts of me
feeling freely sentient

while others feeling
entirely programmed

like cycles of sun
orbits of seasons
roots of life, the ones
I faithfully guess at

some of their branches
of existence quite explainable
while others seeming green-less
tentacles

drawing me toward
the large-dusty-mouth

of the Silence Grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 2:42 AM
- A deep poem, Joe - A dream can be difficult to get out of when it seems so vivid - I wish you a happy new year :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:42 AM
And maybe some are more appropriate to get into, for nothing good, nor bad, does not first start with a vision of love or hate. Blessings my friend.
Rodgers Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 6:26 PM
Joe, your poem eloquently explores the ethereal realm between dreams and waking reality. The metaphorical journey from the fading night to the trembling arms of your mother beautifully captures the mystery of existence. The dichotomy between freely sentient parts and programmed aspects resonates, as does the contemplation of life's cycles and branches that lead towards the enigmatic Silence Grave. It invites reflection on the profound and the unknown. A thoughtful and insightful piece. - Daniel
DiMino Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Daniel; you made my day. Blessings my friend!
Maverick Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 2:17 PM
I enjoyed the reflections you showed Joe, we all Have had echoes that chime in parts you Recount here, be well stay blessed.'
DiMino Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Hi Joe. Brother in Christ. Blessings my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 2:33 AM
You are unlucky. I try in vain to wake up from my nightmares.
DiMino Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Indeed; nightmares are no fun...maybe, the positive: they serve to enlighten us. To seize hold of the moment, and change direction. Blessings my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Thank you for a splendid poem.
DiMino Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much, Hilda; have a blessed day!
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Dreams are like that: like fairy dust and alien visions avoiding analysis--much depth in these observations my friend--your verses ring true in the thoughtful observations you convey. Great ending lines, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Vijay; I join you in a dream for peace in this troubled world. May humanity be awakened to Truth. Blessings my friend.
Sands Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 1:09 PM
Thought provoking and powerful poem Joe. Well written! Happy New Year :)
DiMino Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thank you, Heidi; and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Blessings.
One Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Hey Joe, I like how your poem explores the fleeting nature of dreams and the enigmatic aspects of existence.. I wrote one about a dream also.. You delve into the ephemeral nature of dreams, the complexities of human existence, and the mysteries surrounding life and death skilfully, using vivid imagery and thought-provoking language to evoke a sense of wonder and contemplation... You always write with intelligence and a message... we are all being drawn towards a silent grave my friend..
DiMino Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Thank you for you encouraging words, Si~ :) Actually, I have already opted for cremation.... What the heck, why take up space that can be used for planting or setting up a telescope for watching flying saucers? Man's new ethereal Gods. Have a great day my friend!
One Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 11:13 AM
unless you get cremated and and sit in a jar on a mantlepiece..
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