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Early Riser

I rose early today

before the dream’s end

tried to hold on to its tail
before shaken loose,
watching the Nightly
race off, to dive into
the fading dark at the
horizon. 

Dreams are like that:
like fairy dust
and alien visions

avoiding analysis

like, where was I

before the first slap
before the first cry
before being bathed
dry, then placed in the
trembling arms of my
mother, beholding her
labored miracle

parts of me
feeling freely sentient

while others feeling
entirely programmed

like cycles of sun
orbits of seasons
roots of life, the ones
I faithfully guess at

some of their branches
of existence quite explainable
while others seeming green-less
tentacles

drawing me toward
the large-dusty-mouth

of the Silence Grave

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Date: 1/11/2024 2:42:00 AM
- A deep poem, Joe - A dream can be difficult to get out of when it seems so vivid - I wish you a happy new year :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2024 7:42:00 AM
And maybe some are more appropriate to get into, for nothing good, nor bad, does not first start with a vision of love or hate. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/10/2024 6:26:00 PM
Joe, your poem eloquently explores the ethereal realm between dreams and waking reality. The metaphorical journey from the fading night to the trembling arms of your mother beautifully captures the mystery of existence. The dichotomy between freely sentient parts and programmed aspects resonates, as does the contemplation of life's cycles and branches that lead towards the enigmatic Silence Grave. It invites reflection on the profound and the unknown. A thoughtful and insightful piece. - Daniel
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel; you made my day. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/9/2024 2:17:00 PM
I enjoyed the reflections you showed Joe, we all Have had echoes that chime in parts you Recount here, be well stay blessed.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2024 7:43:00 AM
Hi Joe. Brother in Christ. Blessings my friend!
Date: 1/8/2024 2:33:00 AM
You are unlucky. I try in vain to wake up from my nightmares.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/14/2024 7:44:00 AM
Indeed; nightmares are no fun...maybe, the positive: they serve to enlighten us. To seize hold of the moment, and change direction. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/6/2024 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for a splendid poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/7/2024 8:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Hilda; have a blessed day!
Date: 1/6/2024 6:46:00 AM
Dreams are like that: like fairy dust and alien visions avoiding analysis--much depth in these observations my friend--your verses ring true in the thoughtful observations you convey. Great ending lines, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/7/2024 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay; I join you in a dream for peace in this troubled world. May humanity be awakened to Truth. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/5/2024 1:09:00 PM
Thought provoking and powerful poem Joe. Well written! Happy New Year :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/6/2024 4:45:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi; and Happy New Year to you and your loved ones. Blessings.
Date: 1/5/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hey Joe, I like how your poem explores the fleeting nature of dreams and the enigmatic aspects of existence.. I wrote one about a dream also.. You delve into the ephemeral nature of dreams, the complexities of human existence, and the mysteries surrounding life and death skilfully, using vivid imagery and thought-provoking language to evoke a sense of wonder and contemplation... You always write with intelligence and a message... we are all being drawn towards a silent grave my friend..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/5/2024 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for you encouraging words, Si~ :) Actually, I have already opted for cremation.... What the heck, why take up space that can be used for planting or setting up a telescope for watching flying saucers? Man's new ethereal Gods. Have a great day my friend!
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2024 11:13:00 AM
unless you get cremated and and sit in a jar on a mantlepiece..

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