Notes About The Poem

My very close friend, a brilliant mind and poet, committed suicide about 12 years ago.  His poetry is what I have left and I search his words from time to time.

Early Mourning

Early Mourning

I sift through his Taoist rants
searching the brilliance and madness
for something to make sense; to inspire.

And he does not insult me
with the dust of dead men
though dust is what remains.

Ash falls through my fingers,
as promised, plenty of his own decay,
pure and uncontaminated,

his spirit whispering remembrance;
his legacy blowing in the wind
captured in my heart and lungs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 28, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Hi Thvia, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda
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November 10, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Thvia, enjoyed seeing you on Craig's winning list.. always~ pd
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November 9, 2012 at 1:35 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Thvia xx
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November 8, 2012 at 8:02 PM
CONGRATS THVIA ON AN EXCELLENT WRITE AND WORTHY WIN LUV ..SO SO HAPPY TO SEE U ON PS AGAIN AS WELL AS WINNERS LIST LUV .. HOW R U???
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November 8, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Loss" contest - / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Love the play on words in the title!I can see the ash in the wind ;) Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Loss" contest Thvia. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:07 AM
congratulations on your win...Seren
Ober Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 9:37 AM
I love everything about this poem, especially the title and the last line. Very well done!
Smalling Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Feeling is imagination in the poet's realm, and here feeling becomes nobler yet with brevity, efficiency, and artistic technique.
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September 5, 2010 at 4:17 PM
enjoyed reading...hope you will stop by and read some of my poems at times.
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