Early Morning Walk

A solitary child really,
Shotgun under arm,
Wandering the flood plains 
On Billy Bulson’s farm,
Hammer uncocked, 
Chamber free of charge 
Enjoying the sensation 
Of wandering at large.

Not shooting for pleasure 
But out to fill the pot.
Today we could manage
With just what we’ve got,
Not getting any pleasure 
From any single kill
Just hoping it was clean
And done with some skill

It’s an overcast morning
Sun fighting to break through
Grass wet underfoot from
A heavy morning dew.
It’s Saturday today so
I can take my pleasure
Walking these fields
Slowly at my leisure 

Weapon broken barrelled 
Now I’m back on the road
To ensure I’m complying with
The  shooters safety code.
My next  walk will be
Just a little bit harder, 
Supplies are getting lower
In the family larder.

Any Weekday morning
I’d be in a bit of a rush
Racing up Church Lane
To catch my school bus,
Part of my double life that 
Brings me so much joy, 
Village country bumpkin and
City Grammar School boy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 1:23 AM
Can relate to this. Seems a long time ago but when at high school in country area boys would sometimes arrive at school with 22 in boot of car and Principle would ask how many rabbits they got today. Those were the days when you wore a sheath knife in the weekend and a pocket knife at school. Nobody was shot or stabbed and accidents with all three were rare. Lawn mowers presented more danger as Martin Guptil, cricketer will testify. Many things are offensive weapons now. Regards David in NZ
Ireland Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Thanks David. It was amazing during the long summer holidays how many of my City friends would pop down for a visit., and of course a walk in the fields. As you said, we all carried knives as tools. Sad how our society has changed.
Volumes Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Have spent a little time catching up on poems I missed. This poem of your double life is really wonderful Terry.
Ireland Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Wen - I had the best of both worlds
M  Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Love this nostalgic poem Terry! Really enjoyed your childhood memory….Debx
Turner Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 12:35 PM
I can certainly relate to this one, Terry. You have just described my youthful years. Great write.
Ireland Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Thanks Daniel. Simple pleasures in a close family.
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