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Early Morning Mists

Phantoms seen at dawn
Surrounding rocks strewn at will
Sprites gone with sunrise




For Raul's contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 10:14:00 PM

YOu placed high! congratulations, Barbara, Great third line. LUv, Andrea

John Beam

Date: 2/27/2010 7:14:00 PM

cogratulations on win hope you do it again

James Fraser

Date: 2/27/2010 2:45:00 PM

Barbara, no wonder this poem won, its very very good > and very much deserved >> James

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 4:52:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations on your win with this visual delight. Blessings, Connie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/26/2010 4:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Barbara. You placed 2nd in the Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/24/2010 11:52:00 AM

Dearest Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR second Place win in Raul's Contest Very well Deserved And Written I have read this POETIC ART before and still It's Great LOVE LOVING YOU ALWAYS BG & HG

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 10:00:00 AM

My congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Barbara! Great job! Peace, love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 3:29:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tide Contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/23/2010 11:51:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, dear Barbara. Congrats on your win. Where do you live in CA? Love, Iolanda

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/23/2010 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your success with this fine Haiku Barbara. well done...Thank you for your kind comments today...Margaret

Marty Owens

Date: 2/23/2010 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 4:36:00 PM

Congrats BG on your 2nd place win in Raul's contest.. wonderful victory.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2010 2:42:00 PM

peacefull & spookie! just like the image! good one! Light & Love

Date: 2/23/2010 2:16:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Congratulations on placing second in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/23/2010 1:26:00 PM

BG, congratulations for placeing second in my contest...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/22/2010 4:42:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Yes a winner Beautiful Imagery Good LUCK (as if YOU need it) I LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2010 10:40:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Barbara. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol