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Early Fashion

When Adam first became aware
That his privacy was in question,
He asked his only fashion expert…
A fig leaf was her first suggestion

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Amber Plocica

July 22, 2009 at 12:10 PM

My uncle told me to read this, and said ''It will be hilarious!'', turns out, he was right! Im 11, im new, and i LOVE your poem! X's and O's - Amber

Vince Suzadail Jr.

July 21, 2009 at 5:47 PM

I wondered where the expression came from "turn over a new leaf". Ahaaaa It was Eve. Vince

James Peranteau

July 20, 2009 at 11:15 AM

Funny,..yet this rhyme is filled with thought,..such as Adam and Eve's bareness ! Loved it ! james

Sandra Hudson

July 19, 2009 at 12:09 PM

This made me smile, perhaps it was not a covering of shame, merely the wrappings of a future gift, with surprizes, later becoming the worlds first umbrella...okay...I think too much!-AA

Jared Pickett

July 18, 2009 at 7:21 PM

AHHA.... Bravo...... Great write friend......:JP)

James Fraser

July 18, 2009 at 4:30 PM

Kool Barbara, mmm - i wonder do you get them in different sizes. Nice write>>James

Frances King

July 18, 2009 at 3:06 PM

Real fun, Barbara! But even then, he only got one garment, and she got three - some things never change, do they?

James Marshall Goff

July 18, 2009 at 2:21 PM

much fun! BG! jim

Christopher Higgins

July 18, 2009 at 1:44 PM

LOL..Brilliant work..your mind went to the creativity kitchen and cooked up a nice one..good work.

Carolyn Devonshire

July 18, 2009 at 12:49 PM

(Laughing) Step aside, Liz Claiborne, fashion simply provides one of life's three basic necessities: food, clothes and shelter. This is an amazingly funny poem, Barbara! Love, Carolyn