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Early Fashion

When Adam first became aware That his privacy was in question, He asked his only fashion expert… A fig leaf was her first suggestion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 12:10:00 PM
My uncle told me to read this, and said ''It will be hilarious!'', turns out, he was right! Im 11, im new, and i LOVE your poem! X's and O's - Amber
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Date: 7/21/2009 5:47:00 PM
I wondered where the expression came from "turn over a new leaf". Ahaaaa It was Eve. Vince
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Date: 7/20/2009 11:15:00 AM
Funny,..yet this rhyme is filled with thought,..such as Adam and Eve's bareness ! Loved it ! james
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Date: 7/19/2009 12:09:00 PM
This made me smile, perhaps it was not a covering of shame, merely the wrappings of a future gift, with surprizes, later becoming the worlds first umbrella...okay...I think too much!-AA
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Date: 7/18/2009 7:21:00 PM
AHHA.... Bravo...... Great write friend......:JP)
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Date: 7/18/2009 4:30:00 PM
Kool Barbara, mmm - i wonder do you get them in different sizes. Nice write>>James
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:06:00 PM
Real fun, Barbara! But even then, he only got one garment, and she got three - some things never change, do they?
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:21:00 PM
much fun! BG! jim
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Date: 7/18/2009 1:44:00 PM
LOL..Brilliant work..your mind went to the creativity kitchen and cooked up a nice one..good work.
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Date: 7/18/2009 12:49:00 PM
(Laughing) Step aside, Liz Claiborne, fashion simply provides one of life's three basic necessities: food, clothes and shelter. This is an amazingly funny poem, Barbara! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2009 12:18:00 PM
I like your interpertation of the scene in the garden of eden. Men have depended on women ever since. Sara
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