Ear-Splitting, Liver-Bellied Bullying

plink, plink, water in the sink
sinks slowly into budding suds
torturing the pans and fork tines
who want cascade - show on the road
plink, plop, hands over ears, now stop
but slowly the spatter of drops
like the slow go of a rain storm
keep habitating, repeating
their ear-splitting, liver-bellied
bullying of the spoons and cups
the apron-covered giant turned
off the faucet, threw in the rag,
then the sponge, ew…her hands with gloves
now each piece, that is us, is scrubbed
and ah, true running water-rush
each of us towel dried, put ‘way
from nightmarish brutality
we rest…we rest..until lipstick
lands on the side of grinds in cup
and pan slams onto surface heat
in other words, we get beaten
then comes water in sink, awaken
the bully who sleeps eight hours
look forward to vacation, hers!

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Date: 5/31/2025 3:21:00 PM
Wow, Kim- heavy stuff, dark stuff- an ingenius write, here. This is so raw, like hands too long in the sink....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:20:00 PM
Yes, either from the point of view of the dishes in the sink or the grueling work of the “giant” Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2025 1:53:00 PM
Wow what a lift you've gifted us with. "Sixteen tons" low based singer cover, the banjos and mandolin's sound like pots and pans, just like described, i was listening as I was reading, what a fit! <--get it? :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:20:00 PM
How fun! Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2025 11:23:00 AM
What a creative/fun ~ write/story you have here. Great Ending.... Have a fun weekend writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 5/31/2025 6:36:00 AM
so delicious and creative poem, a joyful surprise, thanks Kim , my favorite of day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:24:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much!
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