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Ear-Splitting, Liver-Bellied Bullying

plink, plink, water in the sink sinks slowly into budding suds torturing the pans and fork tines who want cascade - show on the road plink, plop, hands over ears, now stop but slowly the spatter of drops like the slow go of a rain storm keep habitating, repeating their ear-splitting, liver-bellied bullying of the spoons and cups the apron-covered giant turned off the faucet, threw in the rag, then the sponge, ew…her hands with gloves now each piece, that is us, is scrubbed and ah, true running water-rush each of us towel dried, put ‘way from nightmarish brutality we rest…we rest..until lipstick lands on the side of grinds in cup and pan slams onto surface heat in other words, we get beaten then comes water in sink, awaken the bully who sleeps eight hours look forward to vacation, hers!

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Date: 5/31/2025 3:21:00 PM
Wow, Kim- heavy stuff, dark stuff- an ingenius write, here. This is so raw, like hands too long in the sink....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:20:00 PM
Yes, either from the point of view of the dishes in the sink or the grueling work of the “giant” Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2025 1:53:00 PM
Wow what a lift you've gifted us with. "Sixteen tons" low based singer cover, the banjos and mandolin's sound like pots and pans, just like described, i was listening as I was reading, what a fit! <--get it? :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 4:20:00 PM
How fun! Thank you!
Date: 5/31/2025 11:23:00 AM
What a creative/fun ~ write/story you have here. Great Ending.... Have a fun weekend writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, dear Paula!
Date: 5/31/2025 6:36:00 AM
so delicious and creative poem, a joyful surprise, thanks Kim , my favorite of day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2025 7:24:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much!

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