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Eagle

Boisterous wind, nip in the air. Dancing leaves behind crystal droplets translucent veil. Smell of mist, mesmerising petrichor purifying my soul. Alive and calm! Merrily I look up at the graphite dome. Pleasing and horrifying morphing cumulonimbus clouds. A huge eagle sailing proudly through the storm. Flexing, bending, extending strong wings. Dragging and swimming like a beautiful boat. Some times absolutely still as if falling down. Not bothered about the directions, no phobia of height, Just floating with the wind all around. Displaying ultimate satisfaction and pride. I am lost in its seraphic and serene sight, And it's profound and enigmatic flight. The 'Bird' poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France Date: 10th July; 2020

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Date: 7/26/2020 6:56:00 AM
Love the subtle expressions of the eagle's journey. Your muse is full of that elegant grandeur. Congratulations on your win Aditi. Blessings and love :)
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 10/23/2020 8:14:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating n blessing
Date: 7/16/2020 4:09:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my bird contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 10/23/2020 8:13:00 PM
Thankyou very much :)
Date: 7/12/2020 11:42:00 PM
You have captured well the majesty and glory of an eagle in flight. Well done, Aditi, and congratulations on your win ~ John
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 7/13/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thankyou so very much:)
Date: 7/12/2020 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Aditi. Hugs Eve
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 7/13/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thankyou so very much
Date: 7/11/2020 7:55:00 AM
This is brilliant, you did it very well.. Love the choice of words.. Nice vocabulary and use of assonance and alliteration.
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Aditi Sheemar
Date: 7/13/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks a ton :) So happy to read these words.

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