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Each Painful Step

Reaching the very tip of any mountains, To trip over rocks, To bleed from wounds, To collapse from exhaustion, Are all from my mundane carelessness. But others have a potential to clear the path Without a single wound Without any flaw And with ostentatious sublimity. But they fail to realize Why their legs refuse to endure For long enough, For long enough to reach the mountain top, With such legs of perfection. Though my legs are distorting Though my legs are sputtering out red Though my legs are staggering with extreme pain, I carry my listless and fruitless body to that mountain To that glorious tall mountain stood upright, Waiting for me to challenge him once more. But I have no worries As my legs become stronger As I set foot from one mountain to another. I climb the next mountain as always, As always with mundane carelessness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/22/2016 8:05:00 AM
The persistence to endure is commendable. Nicely done, Andrew.
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Andrew Park
Date: 1/22/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thank you!

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