Each Drop a Heaven-Given Gift

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When the loud thunder died, clouds open a smile with sunshine. Raindrops danced upon blush of scarlet petals, cleansing the warm earth. Sparrows chirped an explicit scene engaging melody. 4/27/2018

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Fj Thomas

Date: 5/7/2018 11:18:00 PM

What a beautiful scene you've spun Eve!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/7/2018 1:43:00 PM

The heavens declare the glory of God; and the sky above proclaims His handiwork. Nature is a reflection of God's greatness and this Sijo paints a wonderful picture of this greatness which flows from your artistic paint brush! Beautiful, Eve! Hugs. Pandita

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/3/2018 6:59:00 PM

I love your imagery. blush of scarlet petals. Yes, not fully red, just a blush. The raindrops cleansed the warm earth. Exactly; you are a wonderful poet, my good woman.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/1/2018 8:40:00 AM

Wow the first line just grabbed me - it is true in life we all need both rain and sun -

Jean Murray

Date: 4/29/2018 3:28:00 AM

Singing in the rain....how lovely Eve.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2018 2:40:00 PM

How beautifully your words flow to create this image of cheerful birds enjoying the rain! Lovely, Eve. Hugs, Carolyn