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Poetic Form: Personification

Inspired: 2023 October 14

*1st Place*
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Contest Judged: 2023 October 20
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

Image: Mud, Modernity, and Melancholia by Brunn Rasmussen (Painting by Dane artist: Laurits Andersen Ring - An old woman from Lille Naestved knitting)

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Beguiled risks sensitive alterations that redesigned unknots and cutup trice as the fresh teases through the looking glass exposing timepiece resemblance glossed spilled. Bemused forgives absence, mindful at hand, tenuously gripping the rolled spent yarn that edges fingertips loosely as threads answer questionable finds, stitch-by-stitch. Period accentuates the sensed thence for the bestilled entangled narrative plots exclamation points of those foregone chapters ... period midst frames of escape. Styled room for maneuvering that spirals at a loss now hangs overhead ticking ... mockery behold guardians of greens that grow within disoriented poise. Blue compliments presence expressed squarely drafting the voiceless lucid residue that nurtured former brush and forever sealed a dream sweeter than a Danish roll.

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Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 8:02:00 AM

An excellence choice of words for this poem.. Congratulations on your win,,

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 3:02:00 PM

Mahalo, Silent One, for extending your kind consideration, my friend. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/21/2023 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write for the painting. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..........

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 3:00:00 PM

Mahalo, Paula, for being a beautiful soul! My cares and blessings to you as well, my friend! Aloha, William

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 5:48:00 AM

Dear Williams. Your literary rendition of this lovely sight is breathtaking. It's wonderful that you were able to capture the original artwork's subtle moods and precise skill. You've built an enticing and spanning setting in your special way that will stay with the reader. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 2:54:00 PM

I am appreciative, Lasaad, of your genuine insightfulness. You exhibit a unique style that defines you. I am truly honored, my friend! Aloha, William

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2023 10:39:00 PM

William, thank you for taking part in the contest. Congratulations on your win, great description and mood of the painting. I like the line,” as threads answer questionable finds, stitch-by-stitch. God bless

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 2:46:00 PM

I am still baffled, Eve, by those phrases' manifestations. Nonetheless, I am truly honored by the placement and your endearing considerations! Aloha, William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/20/2023 9:44:00 PM

Excellent poetic presentation through your unique verse. Every reader will be whelmed. BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. BLESSINGS.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 2:41:00 PM

I am grateful, Anisha, for your warm share and noted laudations! Aloha, William

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/19/2023 9:53:00 AM

Dear William, your poetic interpretation of this painting is beautifully expressed through the vivid yet pensive mood of your verse. I especially admire "forever sealed a dream sweeter than a Danish roll" -wow! such a great finale! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 10:25:00 AM

Ah! Spotlighting the Dane artist reflecting on his native land. Susan, I am delighted in your edifying words that uplift beyond the moment! A heartfelt thanks, my friend! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2023 1:52:00 AM

Love the way you wrote about this picture. It sure is an interesting one!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/15/2023 4:20:00 AM

Aloha, Andrea! I'm indeed grateful as always for your giving spirit, my friend. Mahalo, William