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Dwindling Night

As I combed your hair so fair, It glistened strawberry red, We embraced nature’s bounty Through the stories that I read Content, tranquil, restful As you laid upon your bed Crisp sheets, below your chest, I tracked your every breath Palm cross beneath your pillow, Same place it's always kept Your elegant, fine eyelashes Curtsied graceful as you slept, I took a million photographs Through the lenses of my eyes As legend Frank, sang us out — Reminisced memories, joy and lies As I combed your hair so fair, It glistened strawberry red, Stitched my heart back together With your loving, golden threads
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Mcconnell Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Such a fine penned piece Joanna, full of great imagery and insightfulness too. Take care, Gordon
Chamberlain Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you. :-)
Kauffman Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 10:32 AM
So lovely and tender, Joanna. I like the triad of words scattered throughout the stanzas and the inclusive format of the poem. Congratulations on your win!
Chamberlain Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Thank you.
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Nicely done Joanna. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Chamberlain Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thank you.
La France Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 3:30 AM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest with this wonderful Verse poem, excellent writing and I like your image too _Constance
Chamberlain Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thank you.
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful verse, Joanna, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
Chamberlain Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Thank you.
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