Duty Bound

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Patient to doctor said so sore “I can’t bear this pain any more Kill me…I want to die My lips are going dry” Said doc, “For that I am called for”

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Stephan McBride

Date: 12/5/2022 7:49:00 AM

He needs a new healer ,wright attitude wrong healer : )

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/3/2022 3:01:00 PM

That's a witty limerick! Fantastic! Love ~ Mala

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2022 12:51:00 PM

Once there was someone named Kevorkian who thought that was the right thing to do. I enjoyed reading your creative work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/3/2022 8:50:00 AM

A cold beer I would prescribe...not enough to get drunk, but to just feel imbibed. I needed the smile. Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/3/2022 8:35:00 AM

Valsa, your limerick is both well-written and witty. Thank you for brightening my day.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/2/2022 11:21:00 PM

Lol, hope he paid the doc first before bowing out. Tom