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(Old barn, once-a-time lives; rrj 070714 end):

- Dust By Ancient Times -

Old dust by rusty memories
One time lace curtains in the windows
Fascinating account by a challenging life
Happiness and defeats, sunny days and freezing nights
More than an adventure; for better or worse
An image that evokes old childhood memories for many
"The happy 50s" an expression of relief that the war was over
An aura by joy and optimism ... the future









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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I enjoyed reading this poem.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 3:01 AM
- Darlene, thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise & Adrian :)
Babcock Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 6:58 PM
A time that was different. Nicely done on this poem. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:06 AM
- A pleasure to see you Phyllis, thank you for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Matt Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Real beautiful read... ~phatt
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:05 AM
- Phatt, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Kind a sand poem, however, very enjoyed read and pithy.
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:10 AM
- Many thanks Abdullah, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Asuncion Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Old dust by rusty memories One time lace curtains in the windows Fascinating account by a challenging life Happiness and defeats, sunny days and freezing nights More than an adventure; for better or worse....... nice composition.... congrats on being featured..
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:08 AM
- Bernard, thanks for nice visit, congrats and valuable comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ebbs Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 7:55 AM
The imagery is great, thank you for sharing :)
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:10 AM
- Many thanks Edward, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Beautiful images Anna-Lise: Congrats on having your poem featured on the home page this week. Hugs, SuZ
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:08 AM
- Thanks for nice visit, congrats and valuable comments SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 7:47 AM
What an amazing time it must have, you have captured its enthusiasm well.
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 11:06 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and valuable comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 3:45 PM
what wonderful images you evoke in your lines - life was so much simpler then and despite the hardships I guess people were healthier and probably happier than many are today:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 3:21 AM
- No "happy pills" ... a new future to meet with joy :) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:43 PM
love the photo and love the poem, Anne-Lise, a7. Check out my Butterfly shape I am learning slowly but surely :) hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:09 PM
- Thanks for enjoyable visit a 7 and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Sweet memories of a much simpler time.
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:08 PM
- A computer free world ... and save money under the pillow ... much easier :) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 20, 2016 at 11:30 AM
A superb beauty lurks in this wonderful poem dear friend. Time always slips from our fingers but the sweet memories of some such golden time always live in our memories. Great poem dear friend. I am marking it as my favorite one also and thank you for your visit on my new poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:33 PM
- Hi Ravindra, many thanks for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - Especially thanks for your "fav."... it pleases me much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duggan Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Oh Ann Lise I remember this so well, beautiful generation, I was born in the early 40's so by time I was nearly a teenager it was the 50's, I always think the 50's and 60's was the best generation ti grow up in, thank you for sharing this remarkable little Verse and take care.....Vera
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:30 PM
- Much joy and rock and roll ... the young ladies with short dresses ... stylish men with greasy shiny cream in the hair ... surely a great time, dear Vera :) - A pleasure to see you, thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Sometimes I wish I was part of that generation, times are rusted but memories remain. Very nice poem and pic, hugs ;)
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 12:24 PM
- You are young :) - A pleasure to share with you, Casarah :) - thank you for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:26 PM
A beautifully crafted poem, Anne-Lise. I got a fond memory of 50's, I was born in that decade. Ha ha ha. Lovely poem though. Many love and blessings to you.
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:31 PM
- All children of love was born in the happy 50s :))) - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 2:55 PM
ohh, we are part of what had happened in the past... superbly expressed work with much positivism, dear anne... happy weekend huggs
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 3:28 PM
- Many thanks Nette, for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 1:32 PM
A great picture and a fantastic poem xx
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 1:40 PM
- Glad you liked my poem, thank you - Always a pleasant visit and lovely comments from you, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 11:43 AM
That last line is culminates your thoughts so aptly, my dear. We are tied to the past. Thank you for sharing this nostalgic piece. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 1:37 PM
- I think they were more happy at that time, dear Eileen - Many thanks for pleasantly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 10:47 AM
A breeze of fascinating memories of beauty and of optimism for the future! A fine writing dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 1:32 PM
- I'm not so opptimistisk for today's future, my friend - Thanks for enjoyable visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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