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Dust

My people have always known dust. They brought it in boxes. Across trails covered in tears. To red dirt and black oily clay. They wore it in their clothes, and watched it rise from their feet. Watched it sparkle like stars in the sunlight around them. They weaned their children on dust. They let dust make homes in their faces. Surrounded with moats of worry. They lay down with dust. They lay close to one another and whispered, damn this dust, dust, dust. Before turning to dust. E.G. Maynard. 46 & 2. 3.

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Date: 9/8/2016 6:00:00 AM
The imagery of your piece has made me feel the texture of emotions in every word in your verse... Congrats Trace, for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Trace Baldwin
Date: 9/8/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 9/7/2016 11:29:00 PM
Love it
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Trace Baldwin
Date: 9/8/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for reading and taking time to comment.
Date: 8/24/2016 1:28:00 AM
Coming back for a second read... a very tempest write on dust, so TORN on the awesome imagery.... skat
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Trace Baldwin
Date: 8/24/2016 1:08:00 PM
Thank you. I live in Oklahoma and have some native blood in my veins, so I write some about the Native American condition.
Date: 8/22/2016 12:10:00 PM
E.G.Maynard 45&2.3.,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Trace Baldwin
Date: 8/24/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome. I look forward to my time here.

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