Dusk To Dawn

A spent sun, sullied and bleeding, starts to sink, defeated by Night. And chameleon clouds blush pink, absorbing drops of crimson light. Vermillion inks the horizon, like luminous carnival glass. And a pitted, golden moon shines like a sphere of unpolished brass. The sky is cloaked in black velvet; an ebony softness that flows. And sleep's allowed to wander free; to tend to fantasies and woes. The sun rises like a phoenix from the charcoal ashes of Night. And sets the eastern skies afire; ignited by Dawn's breaking light. Peach, strawberry, and cinnamon; tint, scattered clouds of misty grey. And this mix of pastel colors indicates that Sol's on His way. Shifting shadows detach from black when the sun chases Night away. And twinkling stars swiftly vanish, washed away by the light of day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Back to congratulate you on your #1 placement, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
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February 19, 2018 at 3:12 AM
Congratulations, Emile on your great win.
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Subimal, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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February 18, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Emile! Congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra :)
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much Sandra, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:08 PM
I knew you'd "slay" this contest, Emile! Absolutely fantastic poem!! A fave for me!
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Laura, your words have brought a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Superb imagery shimmers through your poem from sunset to sunrise, Emile. Such a beauty! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win! ~Susan
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February 19, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments are truly appreciated it my friend Emile.
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February 18, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Dear Emile ... I do think Silent One's daughter knows a masterful piece when she reads one!!! Congratulations on your win!! ~Judy
Pinet Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Judith, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
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February 18, 2018 at 12:21 PM
- Congratulations, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Emile this was my daughter's favourite poem.. It is an excellent write.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Pinet Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much Silent One, you and your daughter are very gracious with your time and compliments, I appreciate both my friend, Emile.
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February 16, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Wow Emile!!! This is just beautiful. Darkness quivers, then cowers back acquiescing to a new day. LOVE that line!! Surely a winner! ~ Judy
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Thanks again Judith, your words have brought a smile to my heart, my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:20 PM
The imagery is spectacular. Lovely poem, Emile. Superbly done.
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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February 15, 2018 at 12:02 PM
- A colorful and beautiful poem, Emile - I love your description - Best wishes in the contest (welcome to my suggestion :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
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