Dusk of Dreams

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Written for the contest 3 line~ sponsored by Constance La France..: sometimes it is in darkness we find light

"In the heart of darkness, the moon unlocks the dusk of starry wishes" ~ Quote by Poet As stars sleep, the moon sails through lakes of dreams, tracing sparkling tides of hope, amidst the ache of grief.

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/14/2025 12:12:00 AM

Beautiful writing, as always <3

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/10/2025 5:35:00 PM

IE, you capture the fact that hope and ache are often attached to whatever we do. It's hard to grab onto the moon, but you do. Smiles and good luck holding on. If you can for a sustained period, it does some magic to the heart!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2025 2:10:00 PM

So gorgeous, Ink. I hope I get time to go thru all the recent winner lists on beautiful poems

Terry Miller

Date: 3/8/2025 2:37:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem in three short lines I love your work, congratulations

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2025 4:02:00 PM

Whoa!! I hope the grief is not too close to home. Thanks for sharing this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 3/6/2025 10:41:00 PM

Beautiful lines and lovely quote. Dear Empress, you can step down to any extent, either write a long poem or make it pithy without losing your innate talent for great imagery and metaphors. I am sure you'll be a top winner. All the Best.

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/6/2025 12:18:00 PM

The face of your soul is pretty alongside the sleepy stars Poetess...J.A.B.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 3/6/2025 10:15:00 AM

What a wonderful short tale you’ve scripted. I love it.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2025 10:14:00 AM

I love reading this short wonderful write from you. Also, Love your quote. "Good Luck" Have a great and blessed day writing away....................