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Written for the contest 3 line~ sponsored by Constance La France..: sometimes it is in darkness we find light 

Dusk of Dreams

"In the heart of darkness, the moon unlocks the dusk of starry wishes" ~ Quote by Poet

As stars sleep, the moon sails through lakes of dreams, tracing sparkling tides of hope, amidst the ache of grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/14/2025 12:12:00 AM
Beautiful writing, as always <3
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Date: 3/10/2025 5:35:00 PM
IE, you capture the fact that hope and ache are often attached to whatever we do. It's hard to grab onto the moon, but you do. Smiles and good luck holding on. If you can for a sustained period, it does some magic to the heart!
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Date: 3/9/2025 2:10:00 PM
So gorgeous, Ink. I hope I get time to go thru all the recent winner lists on beautiful poems
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Date: 3/8/2025 2:37:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem in three short lines I love your work, congratulations
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Date: 3/7/2025 4:02:00 PM
Whoa!! I hope the grief is not too close to home. Thanks for sharing this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:41:00 PM
Beautiful lines and lovely quote. Dear Empress, you can step down to any extent, either write a long poem or make it pithy without losing your innate talent for great imagery and metaphors. I am sure you'll be a top winner. All the Best.
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Date: 3/6/2025 12:18:00 PM
The face of your soul is pretty alongside the sleepy stars Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:15:00 AM
What a wonderful short tale you’ve scripted. I love it.
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:14:00 AM
I love reading this short wonderful write from you. Also, Love your quote. "Good Luck" Have a great and blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 3/6/2025 2:42:00 AM
What a beautiful 3 line poem that says so much. I love the imagery Inky. Good luck in the contest...Love and Hugs
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Date: 3/6/2025 3:28:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much dear maria. Grateful always for your kind support
Date: 3/6/2025 1:25:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you much. love, Gina
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/6/2025 3:27:00 AM
Thank you always for your kind support
Date: 3/6/2025 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery IE, in just three lines, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/6/2025 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear tom, grateful for your kind support always
Date: 3/6/2025 1:12:00 AM
How did you do it, Ink? Control your pen to only write three beautiful lines… lol. You still managed to create a lovely celestial scene.
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/6/2025 3:19:00 AM
It was very challenging haha. Easier to write a long one than short. Thank you so much for your compliment and comment: grateful always
Date: 3/6/2025 12:27:00 AM
So true, you have just expounded what poetry is through these three awesome lines, Ink:)
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/6/2025 3:10:00 AM
Awwn thats so sweet and kind of you to say , thank you so much
Date: 3/6/2025 12:07:00 AM
In darkness we find light true .
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/6/2025 2:49:00 AM
Awn thank u dahlin
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