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Dusk In the Meadow

Dusk in the meadow lures a fawn and her doe to the oak tree Where she butts bird feeders with her snout against the hard trunk. Yellow and black seeds flow in a stream down to the ground A small sound startles them The mother’s tail twitches. Both turn statuesque Poised. Waiting. Listening. They are both staring. My dog catches sight of them now. She runs toward them, barking. They turn and ballet themselves into a thick hedge The last thing I see is a flickering white tail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/24/2018 11:35:00 AM
Love the line, "They turn and ballet themselves into a thick hedge"- such a gloriously perfect description! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/24/2018 4:13:00 PM
I saw it again tonight when I got home from work. It is a ballet.
Date: 10/23/2018 5:09:00 PM
It is like a graceful ballet when they turn back like that. Great imagery in a poem about one of my favorite beings. They have the most soulful eyes.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2018 7:43:00 PM
I always consider the wolf and the deer my power animal. I feel I have the most in common with them as I am either placid or quite not.
Date: 10/23/2018 11:44:00 AM
very lovely picture you have painted here.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2018 2:36:00 PM
It is like rolling down hill as I see this picture every day in my yard.
Date: 10/22/2018 11:25:00 PM
The flash of the white tails’ flag. Beautifully written. It brings me right to the tree and bushes
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/23/2018 6:09:00 AM
Which is exactly where these beauties mysteriously disappear in seconds.

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