Dusk In the Meadow

Dusk in the meadow lures a fawn and her doe to the oak tree
Where she butts bird feeders with her snout against the hard trunk.
Yellow and black seeds flow in a stream down to the ground
A small sound startles them
The mother’s tail twitches.
Both turn statuesque
Poised. Waiting.
Listening. They are both staring.
My dog catches sight of them now.
She runs toward them, barking.
They turn and ballet themselves into a thick hedge
The last thing I see is a flickering white tail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcferran Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Love the line, "They turn and ballet themselves into a thick hedge"- such a gloriously perfect description! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 4:13 PM
I saw it again tonight when I got home from work. It is a ballet.
Kiser Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:09 PM
It is like a graceful ballet when they turn back like that. Great imagery in a poem about one of my favorite beings. They have the most soulful eyes.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 7:43 PM
I always consider the wolf and the deer my power animal. I feel I have the most in common with them as I am either placid or quite not.
Awtry Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:44 AM
very lovely picture you have painted here.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:36 PM
It is like rolling down hill as I see this picture every day in my yard.
White Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:25 PM
The flash of the white tails’ flag. Beautifully written. It brings me right to the tree and bushes
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Which is exactly where these beauties mysteriously disappear in seconds.
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