Dunking Cookies While It Rains

Yum!
Sugars and butter -
cream them together.
White and brown mix ‘round.
Flour, salt, baking powder,
vanilla…fond scent…
add chips, scoop, wait - while they bake.

choc’late chip cookie
broke in half into his cup -
splash of milk in eye

grandma and grandson munching on cookies
our laughs are grand too…splashes
occur in and outside ;)

grandma runs off…he asks:
“are you writing a poem?”
“Of course!” she winks,
as he washes the milk from his eye.

4/6/2022

reverse epulaeryu 1/3/5/5/7/5/7
senryu 5/7/5
kimo 10/7/6
free verse
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Date: 4/12/2022 10:40:00 PM
"grandma and grandson munching on cookies our laughs are grand too…splashes occur in and outside ;) grandma runs off…he asks: “are you writing a poem?”" I can see it and I smile for it is also my life.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:21:00 AM
I thought you might like this one :)
Date: 4/7/2022 4:52:00 AM
Much joy exudes from these words --nothing better than family spending time together--especially enjoying cookies.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:41:00 AM
Cookies and family go well together! Thank you, my friend!
Date: 4/7/2022 3:49:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... making me crave for chocolate chips while bonding with my special son. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:41:00 AM
Hope you fulfill that craving! God bless!
Date: 4/7/2022 1:11:00 AM
Cute poem having fun with the young one. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:42:00 AM
Yes…thanks, my friend!
Date: 4/6/2022 8:57:00 PM
Wild idea here, Kim. Next up: 'Raining cookies while I'm Drunk.' Nah -- fuggetaboutit... lol. Good one! Thoroughly enjoyed! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:43:00 AM
I think you need a dunk in the dunk tank…lol! Hold your snowflake tongue out for those raining cookies. Always cheered by your funny comments!
Date: 4/6/2022 3:51:00 PM
Nice combo poem, Kim. Looks like you and grandson had a good time. :-) Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 6:10:00 PM
We did!
Date: 4/6/2022 2:14:00 PM
Cute, thanks for sharing the moment with your grandson. Well written. Blessings ~ Debra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2022 2:55:00 PM
Was funny!
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