Dulcet Melody - Itty Bitty

The rhythm of the rising sun is a sweet song in the morn And when that rhythm sets the sun Luna's dulcet melody is born

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/13/2014 5:29:00 AM

Wonderful write and win Joseph. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 4/11/2014 10:34:00 PM

HI JOSEPH, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2014 9:49:00 PM

Joseph, :) Congratulations, In Andrea's Itty bitty contest.... Goodnight ~ Linda

John Lawless

Date: 4/11/2014 6:58:00 PM

Oh, you wascawy wabbit you. Who could not bow to "Luna's dulcet melody" Very nice, congrats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2014 9:18:00 AM

Way to go with your winning work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/11/2014 5:48:00 AM

Simple yet mesmerising ! congrats on top win !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2014 10:17:00 PM

It was just a simple little poem. but its lyrical quality and that final line captured my heart. First place to you!!! Just the kind of poem I wanted to see in my contest.

Joseph May
Date: 4/11/2014 8:38:00 AM

Thank you for the top spot in your contest Andrea

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/5/2014 4:25:00 PM

Good contrasts here, Joseph, the music of sunrise and sunset are surprisingly similar in timbre and voice. Excellent itty-bitty.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 2:25:00 PM

- Beautiful! - Have a nice weekend, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)