Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Free verse

Dry night in vain

I'm in a dream,
Peeing into a stream,
A snake peeped out,
Some on its snout.
A frog close nearby,
Came out to pry,
It got some too,
From me it withdrew.
I found it funny,
The way a bunny,
Growled near a tree,
Far from my pee.
Then I woke up,
 I rushed to cleanup
Another bedwetting today again.
Dry night in vain.

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Sara Kendrick February 2, 2025 at 5:50 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go..Sara K Maclawrence Famuyiwa February 2, 2025 at 5:57 AM Thanks so much.

Miranda Hawley February 1, 2025 at 9:41 PM I did ask for funny and you delivered that. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Maclawrence Famuyiwa February 1, 2025 at 11:41 PM Thanks for your comment and more importantly for honoring my poem.

Sotto Poet January 31, 2025 at 7:29 AM So humouristic poem, many congratulations on your win. Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 31, 2025 at 7:38 AM Thanks for your appreciative comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2025 at 3:06 AM - A fun poem :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Maclawrence - Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 31, 2025 at 5:14 AM Thanks. I appreciate your good wishes.

Terry Miller January 31, 2025 at 2:04 AM this is too funny, congratulations Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 31, 2025 at 5:14 AM Thanks. God bless.

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2025 at 9:43 AM So amusing! Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 24, 2025 at 10:22 AM Lol...I appreciate your comment and for finding the time to read it.