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Example for my contest 

Dry My Eyes

My Love ~ My Soul You Lift 
Come Walk With Me ~ By The Waters Edge 
Just The Two Of Us ~ In The Glow Of Half Moonlight  
Heal Me ~ I Will Weep No More ~ For Evermore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 7:58 AM
That is how you do it! Excellent composition, and one of the most challenging contest prompts to date! xomo
Lamoureux Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thanks for providing an example. Like Andrea I was curious if punctuation was okay.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 1:50 AM
hi, charles. I just came to see the example of your poem. It's short and sweet! I hope you don't mind how we separate the titles. YOur instructions did not specify. Anyway, your challenge is going very well at Soup with many poets having already done poems for you . Congrats for that!
Messina Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Hi, Andrea. Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting words. Sorry I didn't specify that...no, I don't mind if you separate the titles. I will make sure this time NOT to forget your notes to me..lol Thank you very much!
Ashley Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Oh, so you’re not only a charmer, dear Charlieku, but you’re such a romantic as well.. (but I kinda already knew that.. lol!) This idea is brilliant and beautifully expressive as your titles melt together seamlessly. A wonderfully touching and beautiful poem. Your creativity knows no bounds, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Aww Susan...I am blushing (lol) Thank you so much for your beautiful message. I love being creative as you see, I already have a few ideas for more contests (lol) Warmest wishes always ~Charlie
Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Thanks for the example... uplifting substance; yet challenging since synthesis is called for: binding all titles for one poem... God bless you.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 12:05 PM
When you find someone who lifts your soul, hang on tight and forever.
Chiri Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 8:08 AM
It does flow well! Yet I do not think I could do it myself! Hope your contest goes well!;)
Proxenos Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 2:38 PM
This just flows like a trickling brook - an amazing write Charlie. Hugs, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Intriguing contest you've set up here, Charlie! :) gw
Adams Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 2:52 PM
perfectly put together~!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Wonderful example.
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:42 AM
So romantic! Panagiota
Godwin Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:13 AM
This must be for what I'm calling your 'brain-exerciser' contest. This is cute and clever. I'm glad I looked because my thought was you wished us to weave the titles seamlessly together; now I know you'd prefer they somehow be differentiated. This is gonna be fun - I'm being sincere. Enjoyed the read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Michael Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 5:47 AM
Nice...Mr lover...
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