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Dry My Eyes

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Example for my contest

My Love ~ My Soul You Lift Come Walk With Me ~ By The Waters Edge Just The Two Of Us ~ In The Glow Of Half Moonlight Heal Me ~ I Will Weep No More ~ For Evermore

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/12/2019 7:58:00 AM

That is how you do it! Excellent composition, and one of the most challenging contest prompts to date! xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2019 7:04:00 PM

Thanks for providing an example. Like Andrea I was curious if punctuation was okay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2019 1:50:00 AM

hi, charles. I just came to see the example of your poem. It's short and sweet! I hope you don't mind how we separate the titles. YOur instructions did not specify. Anyway, your challenge is going very well at Soup with many poets having already done poems for you . Congrats for that!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/8/2019 5:08:00 PM

Hi, Andrea. Thank you so much for your encouraging and uplifting words. Sorry I didn't specify that...no, I don't mind if you separate the titles. I will make sure this time NOT to forget your notes to me..lol Thank you very much!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/5/2019 7:30:00 PM

Oh, so you’re not only a charmer, dear Charlieku, but you’re such a romantic as well.. (but I kinda already knew that.. lol!) This idea is brilliant and beautifully expressive as your titles melt together seamlessly. A wonderfully touching and beautiful poem. Your creativity knows no bounds, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 7/8/2019 5:11:00 PM

Aww Susan...I am blushing (lol) Thank you so much for your beautiful message. I love being creative as you see, I already have a few ideas for more contests (lol) Warmest wishes always ~Charlie

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/5/2019 6:10:00 AM

Thanks for the example... uplifting substance; yet challenging since synthesis is called for: binding all titles for one poem... God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/4/2019 12:05:00 PM

When you find someone who lifts your soul, hang on tight and forever.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/4/2019 8:08:00 AM

It does flow well! Yet I do not think I could do it myself! Hope your contest goes well!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/3/2019 2:38:00 PM

This just flows like a trickling brook - an amazing write Charlie. Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/3/2019 10:24:00 AM

Intriguing contest you've set up here, Charlie! :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/2/2019 2:52:00 PM

perfectly put together~!

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/2/2019 1:31:00 PM

Wonderful example.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/2/2019 7:42:00 AM

So romantic! Panagiota

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2019 7:13:00 AM

This must be for what I'm calling your 'brain-exerciser' contest. This is cute and clever. I'm glad I looked because my thought was you wished us to weave the titles seamlessly together; now I know you'd prefer they somehow be differentiated. This is gonna be fun - I'm being sincere. Enjoyed the read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2019 5:47:00 AM

Nice...Mr lover...