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Dry

The young doe so alive
Brought down by one shot
Way back, several years ago

The hunters could not find her
Venison they desired to eat
Then her carcass lay at the edge
Of an open field next to the deep woods

Slowly 
Vultures, crows, bobcats, ants
Ate their fill
Now only dry bones left
Still baked by the sun 

My writing has hit a dry spell
Like those dry bones
Baked by the spring sun
All dried up, turned white by the sun 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neumann Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 5:53 AM
That poem is not dry at all. It is meaningful instead. Best wishes and follow the drought or not, Kai
Flaherty Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 6:13 PM
So 2 Dust to Dust Ashes to Ashes Death is Dry Water is Life Like it Sara
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 6:27 AM
Christopher, Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Onclaud Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 1:03 PM
sara, this is eloquently crafted..not a hint of being stuck!...one of your best!...huggs
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Nette, I am though. Spring fever maybe. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 7:12 AM
- Your pen is not dry, Sara ... a wonderful writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 4:37 PM
SS, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Incredibly intriguing, Sara! (soup mail please). Best wishes, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 8:20 AM
Gershon, I have answered you soup mail. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 7:51 PM
this is fantastic, Sara. A FAVE
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Andrea, I am honored that you would fave this one. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 8:13 AM
Sara, this is VERY well-written and moving--not evidence of writer's block! :-) Janice
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Janice, I appreciate the kind review. I am drawing blanks though for some reason. I feel like my brain is tired. LOL..Sara
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