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The young doe so alive Brought down by one shot Way back, several years ago The hunters could not find her Venison they desired to eat Then her carcass lay at the edge Of an open field next to the deep woods Slowly Vultures, crows, bobcats, ants Ate their fill Now only dry bones left Still baked by the sun My writing has hit a dry spell Like those dry bones Baked by the spring sun All dried up, turned white by the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/21/2020 5:53:00 AM
That poem is not dry at all. It is meaningful instead. Best wishes and follow the drought or not, Kai
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Date: 4/16/2019 6:13:00 PM
So 2 Dust to Dust Ashes to Ashes Death is Dry Water is Life Like it Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/17/2019 6:27:00 AM
Christopher, Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 4/6/2019 1:03:00 PM
sara, this is eloquently crafted..not a hint of being stuck!...one of your best!...huggs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
Nette, I am though. Spring fever maybe. LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 4/5/2019 7:12:00 AM
- Your pen is not dry, Sara ... a wonderful writing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2019 4:37:00 PM
SS, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara
Date: 4/4/2019 8:26:00 PM
Incredibly intriguing, Sara! (soup mail please). Best wishes, Gershon
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2019 8:20:00 AM
Gershon, I have answered you soup mail. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 4/4/2019 7:51:00 PM
this is fantastic, Sara. A FAVE
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2019 8:18:00 AM
Andrea, I am honored that you would fave this one. Sara
Date: 4/4/2019 8:13:00 AM
Sara, this is VERY well-written and moving--not evidence of writer's block! :-) Janice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2019 5:05:00 PM
Janice, I appreciate the kind review. I am drawing blanks though for some reason. I feel like my brain is tired. LOL..Sara

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