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Drunken Moon

* * * aching head * * * drunk 5/7/5/ man on the moon watchful eye sees the witch fly by Judy Konos 7/3/15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:15:00 AM

Judy, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Eve Roper

Date: 7/10/2015 9:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, it’s so funny :~) Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:54:00 AM

Hi Judy, I enjoyed rereading this one. Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:33:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning haiku Judy!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 3:02:00 PM

dropping back with a big congratulations...Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Judy. I like these lines which have the making of a modern haiku. Takes me back to yesteryear:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:59:00 PM

this is so cool, Judy. Can't believe I missed it from before. Congrats!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:57:00 PM

Well done, Judy, here's lookin' at you, kid.... Viv x

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 PM

Hi Judy congrats great drunken moon!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:12:00 PM

Judy, i did not get the first line, however I enjoyed the entry. Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 2:03:00 PM

Sorry I thought a Haiku was 5-7-5 LOL...lack of anything better to do ....Thanks for hosting mega contests...You're the best...Boot SKAT and Boogie....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/5/2015 6:13:00 PM

Did you want the 575 to break up your lines?? Great poem but that break interfered with my enjoyment.

Judy Konos
Date: 7/5/2015 7:05:00 PM

Well Richard if that's the only problem you've got...I'd say you're a real lucky man! CHEERS!