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Drunken Loneliness

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Mike Francis

Date: 5/22/2011 3:45:00 PM

I like it- Belvedere certainly will not make the mind clear!

Lakisa Battie
Date: 5/22/2011 4:02:00 PM

Thanks.... And I know that drinking doesn't heal anything..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 4:36:00 PM

I can feel the pain in your words, Lakisa. Hope this is not something you're going through right now. As James said below, the pain is still there the next day. Alcohol is a temporary reprieve for some, but it never made me feel better -- only worse. A very heartfelt poem. Best wishes, Carolyn

Lakisa Battie
Date: 5/20/2011 5:35:00 PM

Thank u Carolyn, and no these feeling that I portray in this write isn't my true emotions.... I'm glad that u enjoyed my write... Enjoy your weekend safe and blessed....

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/20/2011 3:18:00 PM

Good ending, and the poem has a nice flow to it, although your pain shows through.... Michael

Lakisa Battie
Date: 5/20/2011 3:29:00 PM

Thank u so much, I was trying to portray that image. Although it isn't the feelings that I possess inside... I'm just trying a new way of expression.. Sincerely LaKisa,

James Foulk

Date: 5/20/2011 12:28:00 PM

good write , drinking does not my the problem go away, because it is still there the next day. enjoyed this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Lakisa. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol

Lakisa Battie
Date: 5/20/2011 3:33:00 PM

No problems, just trying a new form of expressions... Those emotions expressed in my write aren't my true feelings.... Thanks for your insight and your care.... Sincerely LaKisa,