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Drunken Loneliness

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Mike Francis

May 22, 2011 at 3:45 PM

I like it- Belvedere certainly will not make the mind clear!

Lakisa Battie

May 22, 2011 at 4:02 PM

Thanks.... And I know that drinking doesn't heal anything..

Carolyn Devonshire

May 20, 2011 at 4:36 PM

I can feel the pain in your words, Lakisa. Hope this is not something you're going through right now. As James said below, the pain is still there the next day. Alcohol is a temporary reprieve for some, but it never made me feel better -- only worse. A very heartfelt poem. Best wishes, Carolyn

Lakisa Battie

May 20, 2011 at 5:35 PM

Thank u Carolyn, and no these feeling that I portray in this write isn't my true emotions.... I'm glad that u enjoyed my write... Enjoy your weekend safe and blessed....

Michael J. Falotico

May 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM

Good ending, and the poem has a nice flow to it, although your pain shows through.... Michael

Lakisa Battie

May 20, 2011 at 3:29 PM

Thank u so much, I was trying to portray that image. Although it isn't the feelings that I possess inside... I'm just trying a new way of expression.. Sincerely LaKisa,

James Foulk

May 20, 2011 at 12:28 PM

good write , drinking does not my the problem go away, because it is still there the next day. enjoyed this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 20, 2011 at 11:21 AM

Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Lakisa. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol

Lakisa Battie

May 20, 2011 at 3:33 PM

No problems, just trying a new form of expressions... Those emotions expressed in my write aren't my true feelings.... Thanks for your insight and your care.... Sincerely LaKisa,

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