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Poetic Form: Rhyme/Trimeric
Inspired: 2024 August 03
Contest Judged: 2024 September 02
Sponsored by: Janice Canerdy
The endless summer ended well. An oddity of terms that's said? It's what the seasons say, pray-tell. Flipped coin of an Indian head. An oddity of terms that's said? It meant an Indian Summer, your well's true, but it'll last longer. It's what the seasons say, pray-tell. If what's said, was said, nonetheless, time goes forth, progress, not digress. Flipped coin of an Indian head, an advancement of common sense, not old minds riddled in past tense.

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Date: 8/3/2024 9:54:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun summer write. "Good Luck"  Have a wonderful/blessed day..........
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/3/2024 10:58:00 AM
Paula, a mild 79-81 degrees summer along with the balmy draft--not bad, Aloha William
Date: 8/3/2024 3:18:00 AM
Good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Glad that your endless summer ended well. We are still in summer. Hot, humid and uncomfortable outside. Sara K
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/3/2024 5:01:00 AM
Oh!! Okay. Memories can be wonderful or sad. Sara K
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/3/2024 3:34:00 AM
Sara, mems of a hot August in Washington as I flipped burgers on the grill out back, surrounded by mocking evergreens and the kids sprawled on the lawn, actively asleep. Alas, what retirees in Hawaii be thinkin'. Aloha William

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