Drowning Ivy

Here she comes again with that dingy pink watering can
    I’m soaked as it is; I’ve tried to tell her, STOP WATERING!
But no, thirsty or not, I’d better get ready for it

Now Lily doesn’t mind, Peace Lily, that is, she drinks a lot
     And that’s her business but I’m turning brown down to the roots

Hey Lily, wake up girl; I don’t like to talk but, PASSED OUT AGAIN!

As for me, is a little soil test too much to ask for?
     It’s a bit ticklish, a finger in a sensitive spot
But she’d know that we are all not thirsty at the same time

Well, for now, back to her favorite game, DROWNING IVY! 

9/18/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/7/2017 5:43:00 AM
Great humour coming through on this one, Mike. Unfortunately, I have no green thumb so occasionally my plants get a bit of a double-drenching!! Congrats on your win! Regards, John.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/7/2017 6:23:00 AM
Thanks John, I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 9/28/2017 7:32:00 AM
Back to congratulate! Hugs! xomo :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen!
Date: 9/28/2017 4:05:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats and thanks for my first giggle of the day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks again Jan xxxooo
Date: 9/28/2017 1:53:00 AM
Mike, I love this personification, well done and congratulations on your win !
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Broker Wings !!!
Date: 9/27/2017 11:19:00 PM
This is superb, Mike, and I adore the direction you took with this - humorous and whimsical ... enjoyed it very much, my friend! Blessings and congrats on your well-earned win! :-)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you and the very same to you!
Date: 9/27/2017 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi, to you as well!!!
Date: 9/27/2017 8:41:00 PM
That last line - priceless! As bad as waterboarding! Poor Ivy! Congrats on your win! :) Kim
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim!!
Date: 9/18/2017 6:41:00 PM
This is great little humor here, Mike. I enjoyed this personification of the drowning ivy!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thanks much Andrea '
Date: 9/18/2017 3:40:00 PM
This one made me smile, this is clever.. great personification..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Silent one!xxxoo
Date: 9/18/2017 3:40:00 PM
You are the voice of every plant I ever destroyed from over-watering. How I wish I could have those chances back because they contained Beautiful roses.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 3:51:00 PM
Yes, I learned the hard way too !!
Date: 9/18/2017 3:06:00 PM
lovely personification Mike and I love the ending lol!:-0 hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thanks, Jan
Date: 9/18/2017 2:53:00 PM
Lol awesome! That's what I would hear if only, as I kill my succulents with kindness. xomo!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!
Date: 9/18/2017 2:44:00 PM
LOL . A funny and fun creative poem Mike :)
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