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Tough days produce abundant love. Worth every moment.

Drowning In Love

euphoric in chlorinated water
a splash
grandma has arrived
small ducks
chatter 
             and cling
battle for hugs

7/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ellison Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Absolutely love it dear Kim... have a great Tuesday!!! Love and hugs, Happy Jack XOX
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thanks so much, dear Jack!
Boddie Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Love grows stronger by the instance....the heart is too weak to show it resistance....and the longer that it Lives....the harder that it gives....that's, of course, when the Love is TRUELY True....then simply basking in its glory is all you have to do....Beautiful write here kim….;)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Michael Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Nice imagery... Lots of hugging... All the best Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Faulkner Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 2:39 PM
You must be having a fun summer, Kim, enjoyed reading this! (also I posted a 'thank you' to my poetry soup friends and since you are one I hope you check it out!)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 7:38 AM
I will! Thanks!
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