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He goes through each day obsessing over how to increase his earnings. Times are hard. He's drowning in debt; his bills gradually piling up. Creditors bug him so much, he feels like screaming; soon landlord will come knocking. He consolidated his loans; it hasn't made much of a difference He asked his boss for overtime, nothing doing. He applied for a second job, no dice. He's still waiting for a call back. He wants to start a home business, but doesn't enough start up cash. Desperation is gradually setting in. He's put unneeded clothes on consignment, he's holding garage sale, rationing food, clipping coupons, exercising for free, shopping in thrift stores, bicycling to work and he's cut cable television down to basic. Anything... to decrease his spending. Date written: 03/09/2021

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Date: 3/10/2021 4:59:00 AM
That sinking feeling is hurting many. The stimulus can't pass fast enough to help them.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/10/2021 6:45:00 AM
True, Vijay. That stimulus will make a tremendous difference especially in the lives of folks living paycheck to paycheck. Have a blessed day, bud!
Date: 3/9/2021 6:11:00 PM
The sadness and desperation emanates from your dramatic verse.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/9/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by and commenting, Kim:-)

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