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Drowning

~ Treading water, drifting on jet streams above setting suns, reaching below to find that existence is more than bobbing up and down, wishing the earth were still as you make it move breathing aromatic dreams, filling my lungs with sweet fragrance, as I gasp for air, my mouth opened, suckling taut whispers tickling my tongue when palms sway upon moistened flesh peering down, peering up as the tide comes and I sink breathless into the depths of her love ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/11/2020 2:17:00 PM
This beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/11/2020 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Jean for all of your kindness.
Date: 2/10/2020 9:14:00 AM
A breathtaking love poem with intense imagery - no wonder you sink breathless into the depths of her love! Blessings Chris, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/10/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 2/6/2020 8:00:00 PM
Oh, even when your drowning..you sink into her arms! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 2/6/2020 6:00:00 PM
Beautiful flow of words. Wonderful descriptions.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 2/6/2020 2:52:00 PM
And what a way to go...drowning in her love...sooo nice Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thanks John, glad you liked this one
Date: 2/6/2020 2:45:00 PM
A man with such a romantic soul is every woman's dream, Chris. I like the way you describe gasping for air, because love can leave us breathless. Drowning in a sea of love! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn for always being so nice to me. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 2/6/2020 8:36:00 AM
- A soul's story, Chris - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 2/6/2020 8:25:00 AM
I like the ending...I sink breathless into the depths of your love. That says it all Chris. Well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 2/5/2020 7:45:00 PM
sigh to have a love like that, one is truly blessed... simply beautiful Chris... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2020 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sandy. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

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