Drought

Death scours the grove, A wretched symphony chatters: Requiem of the leaves.

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Date: 3/17/2010 9:02:00 AM

The vivid imagery works well in this poem. I really like the creative perspective in the last two lines. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 3/16/2010 3:51:00 AM

Thank you for your valued critique and honour to my poem Raul.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2010 4:58:00 PM

There is no drought in your gift with haiku poetry....excellent as always, Raul. ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2010 4:17:00 PM

Imagery is keen Raul and vitally vivid and vibrant .. luv your last line immensely.. a beautiful Haiku... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 3/15/2010 2:40:00 PM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2010 1:35:00 PM

Very descriptive write explaining the title...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara