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Drought

Death scours the grove,
A wretched symphony chatters:
Requiem of the leaves.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2010

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March 17, 2010 at 9:02 AM

The vivid imagery works well in this poem. I really like the creative perspective in the last two lines. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen

March 16, 2010 at 3:51 AM

Thank you for your valued critique and honour to my poem Raul.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

March 15, 2010 at 4:58 PM

There is no drought in your gift with haiku poetry....excellent as always, Raul. ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 15, 2010 at 4:17 PM

Imagery is keen Raul and vitally vivid and vibrant .. luv your last line immensely.. a beautiful Haiku... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Iolanda Scripca

March 15, 2010 at 2:40 PM

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March 15, 2010 at 1:35 PM

Very descriptive write explaining the title...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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