Yanny Widjanarko Poet Sonnet

Droplets of Heaven

OLD POEM: GRAY SKY FALLS (SIJO)

Paralyzed sunshine of the day, gray kissed skyscrapers in faint
Blurry dance stuck in the air as the dew pervades some occlusions
Day sketched gloom in beauty behind the droplets of breezy nimbus

NEW POEM:

Thy painter of sky smiled from altitudes
The angels flew, danced amid the wet clouds
Coloring mist, dust of beatitude
Heaven's gate roared, the lightning showed some proud

The veil of universe lurks from behind
The shades crawl slow, camouflaged by the dark
Droplets pervade the odor of sweet mind
Like the smell of a wet land, the yearn park

Breezes whistle through the aisles of droplets
Caressing the skin while sky sheds its tears
Gaze to the stunning gloom in violets
The sparks steal some moments, shines with no fears

Flood recede and leaves caught the rest of rain
As my heart fades from melancholy, drained

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4th position
Metamorph
Sponsor	Debbie Guzzi

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Poet Destroyer A May 1, 2013 at 6:01 PM Yanny, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD Yanny Widjanarko May 16, 2013 at 9:30 AM Thank you Linda :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny

Sara Kendrick April 29, 2013 at 2:03 PM Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara Yanny Widjanarko April 29, 2013 at 11:06 PM Thank you Sara glad to have your comment here :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 28, 2013 at 9:10 AM Congrats on your win. Excellent piece ~A.O Yanny Widjanarko April 28, 2013 at 6:33 PM Thank you Abdul :D glad to have your second visit :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 25, 2013 at 4:37 PM Way to go Yanny, excellent win! I enjoyed reading again. Yanny Widjanarko April 25, 2013 at 6:35 PM Thank you Rick, always pleasure to have you here :D wishing you a wonderful day, hug, yanny

Debbie Guzzi April 25, 2013 at 3:43 PM I loved both of these, to me they are equally good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Yanny Widjanarko April 25, 2013 at 6:34 PM Thank you Debbie your contest is really challenging and inspired me a lot :) wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 25, 2013 at 10:12 AM Many congratulations Yanny luv , a well deserved win xx Yanny Widjanarko April 25, 2013 at 6:33 PM Thank you Mandy :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 17, 2013 at 8:48 AM This is really beautiful my friend Yanny... Good luck in the contest. Yanny Widjanarko April 25, 2013 at 6:31 PM Thank you Abdul :D

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2013 at 12:56 PM - You have written it very beautifully Yanny!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko March 30, 2013 at 11:32 AM Thank you Anne :D your words really uplifting, you are absolutely made my day Anne :D hug,yanny

Richard Lamoureux March 28, 2013 at 7:54 AM Stunning! Old and new in perfectness of harmony. Sweet dreams Yanny. Yanny Widjanarko March 28, 2013 at 8:31 AM Thank you Rick, this is my first attempt in sonnet and it's a pleasure to see such an uplifting comment by you in my evening :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny