Droplet

Fine Haiku with a lovely image. Love seeing a drip of natures champagne on a leaf, James :)

Love your lovely haiku, Sara. I can imagine a beautiful picture to go with it. // Heard that you're back home after surgery and doing well; welcome back and hope you'll soon be running about:) // paul

Haiku is always amazing when poets like you do it...// Malik

You have seen the beauty of droplets with your beautiful inner sight. Really that's. I am stopping by here.... Loved always my sweet friend,bl

Excellent. Beautiful piece of writing. Enjoyed. Tfs

You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Sweet haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

love this Sara,, clinging to life, hope you are recovering well....

very lovely description of a fall morning! Sara, how ARE you? I hear you are out of surgery. I sure hope it went well.

beautiful picture painted

Very descriptive perception about it Sara! love and light! xxxD.

If you take the title away here for a second, there are two independent sentences: 1. "unmoved by fall breeze"...........hmmm, wonder what it is? next is 2. "clings 'pon wandering jew leaf"....very intruiging...heck, it could be a frantic frog clinging for dear life I need the answer, the Kireji, and you got in on Line one: 3. a waterdroplet Enjoyed. Good effort. Thomas _______________________________

First, I enjoyed the poem. Haiku's I always love trying to figure them out, even if there is no intent to go so far as the traditional Haiku with the Kiru and Kireji. You did a great job with the 5-7-5....kudos. Traditional Haikus usually have a juxtaposition of two suppositions, usually Line's one and two, but not always. Too, the Kireji, the cutting word, phrase of line (solution) is the third line, sometimes 2nd. next page

Very lovely Sara! I love haikus n this is so sweet n tender!

You are so good at this form! Lovely piece.

Amazing image! I can just picture it. Thank you for your visit to my poetry.

Nice image " wandering jew leaf". sara