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Droplet

a waterdroplet clings 'pon wandering jew leaf.. unmoved by fall breeze

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James Fraser

Date: 1/24/2015 2:08:00 PM

Fine Haiku with a lovely image. Love seeing a drip of natures champagne on a leaf, James :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2014 8:58:00 AM

Love your lovely haiku, Sara. I can imagine a beautiful picture to go with it. // Heard that you're back home after surgery and doing well; welcome back and hope you'll soon be running about:) // paul

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/29/2014 8:06:00 AM

Haiku is always amazing when poets like you do it...// Malik

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/28/2014 10:41:00 AM

You have seen the beauty of droplets with your beautiful inner sight. Really that's. I am stopping by here.... Loved always my sweet friend,bl

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/28/2014 7:04:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful piece of writing. Enjoyed. Tfs

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/27/2014 10:15:00 AM

You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Sweet haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/27/2014 9:37:00 AM

love this Sara,, clinging to life, hope you are recovering well....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2014 10:32:00 PM

very lovely description of a fall morning! Sara, how ARE you? I hear you are out of surgery. I sure hope it went well.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/26/2014 4:44:00 PM

beautiful picture painted

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/26/2014 1:12:00 PM

Very descriptive perception about it Sara! love and light! xxxD.

Thomas Carney

Date: 9/26/2014 11:42:00 AM

If you take the title away here for a second, there are two independent sentences: 1. "unmoved by fall breeze"...........hmmm, wonder what it is? next is 2. "clings 'pon wandering jew leaf"....very intruiging...heck, it could be a frantic frog clinging for dear life I need the answer, the Kireji, and you got in on Line one: 3. a waterdroplet Enjoyed. Good effort. Thomas _______________________________

Thomas Carney

Date: 9/26/2014 11:37:00 AM

First, I enjoyed the poem. Haiku's I always love trying to figure them out, even if there is no intent to go so far as the traditional Haiku with the Kiru and Kireji. You did a great job with the 5-7-5....kudos. Traditional Haikus usually have a juxtaposition of two suppositions, usually Line's one and two, but not always. Too, the Kireji, the cutting word, phrase of line (solution) is the third line, sometimes 2nd. next page